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by Amber V Moonstone

Wednesday, June 23, 2010
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Just thinking about life and the Universe!


by Amber "V" Moonstone


Thoughts are like butterflies
ever flitting and free
they bounce off your head
as if trying to find some rhyme or reason.

They come into you like a
flash of lightning,
illuminating your whole being;
then flee, like a scared rabbit.

It's funny, if you don't try to remember them,
they are elusive as that butterfly.
I fill my head with positive thoughts,
and when anything negative enters,

I stop them,
dead in their tracks.
No negative thoughts are welcome,
This head is only open to peace and tranquility!

so thoughts,
come hither,
only if you make me


          G O O D !!!!


"Thoughts" (c) Amber "V" Moonstone 6/23/10


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Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson 6/30/2010
Our thoughts do come and go. Its hard when one looses them completely!....M
Reviewed by Don Juan Amante 6/28/2010
very positive and strong
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 6/27/2010
Butterflies are so free and peaceful. At least we think so. A nice poem, Amber. Hugs,
Reviewed by Nicole Weaver 6/25/2010
I like how you expressed such an important message. We all can control what we allow to enter our minds, doing so can either make or break you. Great write!
Reviewed by Roger Ochs 6/25/2010
Lovely thoughts artistically expressed. I especially enjoyed the playfullness of the ending.
Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill 6/25/2010
I really like your positivity Amber! This piece of poetry warms my heart. Nice sensual visual too!

Reviewed by Michelle Mead 6/24/2010
:) Positivity is such a powerful thing, if more people realized it, the whole world would be a much happier place. Nice one, Amber.
Reviewed by Emile Tubiana 6/24/2010
Dear Amber, you reached the same conclusion as I have reached 45 years ago.
I do business with people that make me feel good. Those who gave me bad feelings, I sent them where they came from. This way I did my selection in everything. Great poem, great thoughts.

Love Emile
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 6/24/2010
good write as thoughts can determine so much!
Reviewed by Victoria Lane (Reader) 6/24/2010
Very positive, it made me smile :)
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 6/24/2010
well done
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 6/24/2010
This head is only open to peace and tranquility

A marvelous way to live.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/24/2010
You thought you saw a puttee cat but you didn't it was only Felix the cat's poetry...good one Amber.
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 6/24/2010
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 6/24/2010
Thinking of me, thinking of you, thinking of us...opening the imagination's door and enter other world, a kinder one, where ugly and beauty doesn't exist but where there is a tenderness landscape going forever...thoughts...


Reviewed by George Carroll 6/23/2010
Little consolation in what you read these days so staying positive keeps you in balance and harmony.
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 6/23/2010
Amber, I agree with you 100%! A powerful and inspirational write!
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo 6/23/2010
Yep, yep. We are on the same wavelength. Yours is very inspiring. I believe that if you stay focused on the positive, you step is lighter and your smile is brighter. And, yes, it does compliment "The Beauty of ..." from the standpoint that each of us needs to focus on what makes our life worthwhile. I, like you, liked yours better than mine. Then, again, I always feel blessed and re-vitalized when I read your poetry. Your energy comes through 'loud & clear.'

God bless you,
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 6/23/2010
Achieving a balance of thought power and receptivity is the key to healthy living and success...Prosperity Law No. 7 says we become what we imagine, positive or negative...millions of new thoughts are born every minute. One needs to let positive thoughts take root and grow. How fully developed an idea becomes is dependent upon the positive energy spent on that seed idea...great thoughts, Amber...

Reviewed by Christine Alwin 6/23/2010
Amber, your poem flutters with positive energy and outlook of life...beautiful~
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 6/23/2010
Beautiful ~ This is an inspiration and since tomorrow is a fresh start, I am inspired by your poem to try incredibly hard to do this ~
Thank you for this!
Reviewed by Carin Spirit 6/23/2010
You have a beautiful perspective on life. Thank you for sharing it.

Warmth and Love to you, Carin'
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 6/23/2010
Lepidopteran Wings are our jewels of goodness kissing & dancing
as love flourishing her in your beautiful poetic "Thoughts"!!!!
Yours...Mine...Theirs...all the tranquil goodness & stillness
sensual & expressive are your words Viv & your heart & that totally
GRooooVaaaay Pic!!!
Naked With Lepidopteran Wings
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 6/23/2010
You have the happy exuberance of postive thinking. That is one of the many reasons you are loved so much. As always I enjoyed this writing of yours very nuch.


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