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| Reviewed by Tom Hyland |
6/29/2010 |
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GEORG - THIS PROVES IT!
YOU, YOU - DIRTY, DIRTY - OLD, OLD - MAN, MAN!
yer poor, dumb, younger BRO - 'WITLESS - MATCHLESS - MATLACK'
thinks yer story is 'bout dental hygiene -
n' he's waitin' fer the 'TOOTH FAIRY!"
DUH? CUZ TK ... 'CAVITY FILLER EXTRA-ORDINAIRE!'
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| Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald |
6/26/2010 |
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| So much said in such a few words. Amazing. |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
6/26/2010 |
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WOW! and...WHAMY! You are so precisely imaginative with your words. Woak of art, Georg!
Blessings and Love - Micke |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
6/26/2010 |
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| Have you been groping those nurses again mister? Be careful they outnumber you and that blue pill can only do so much. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Roger Ochs |
6/25/2010 |
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| Gulp! You've invented an answer to Haiku and you are its Master. Gassho. |
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| Reviewed by Chessly Nesci |
6/25/2010 |
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| WOW!! This is a fantastic visual!!! Excellent four lines about lust!! Your friend, ~Chessly |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
6/25/2010 |
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| Whoaaaaaaaaaaa..now ya talking darlin..LOL....Hugss |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
6/25/2010 |
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I think your poem should be in Webster's Dictionary. It certainly is the most descriptive meaning of the word. Whew! Spoken like a man who's been there. lol
God bless you,
Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
6/24/2010 |
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| WOW! |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
6/24/2010 |
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| i've watched movies like this. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/24/2010 |
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woo hooo...
This definatly captured the lust side of it, not sure about the love side but then the line between the two is often blurred isn't it?
fee |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
6/24/2010 |
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| I never knew cavities wanted or needed love, the very next time I have a toothache I will offer it love & such...;-) e |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/24/2010 |
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| Gee I thought everybody experienced that, guess not. |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
6/24/2010 |
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erect and at attention
and melting all over your "Four lines about Lust"
mix in some Love & now you're talkin my cup of hot steepin tea!!
Rolls In The Hay Bales
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
6/24/2010 |
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very interesting, what pills are you on my friend?
And what hospital are you in?
I know it's in Sweden, but my, this must be some therapy you're under....... |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/24/2010 |
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| Me oh My oh My oh Me....wow, this is steaming beauty~ |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
6/24/2010 |
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| I had to put my hands over my ears Georg. lol...J'nia, the innocent. lol again |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
6/24/2010 |
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Georg, you have nicely displayed the joys of lust and love.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) |
6/24/2010 |
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| Must really be feeling better...wow...lol... |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
6/24/2010 |
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| BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
6/24/2010 |
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| :) |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
6/24/2010 |
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Georg, First let me tell you, by this poem, I know you are feeling better!!!! lol
I find this so beautifully erotic..Especially the last line.
Good to see you are doing much better.
Much peace, love and light and to lust!
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Joel Sattler |
6/24/2010 |
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Being a dirty old man is no picnic!
I oughta know.... |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/24/2010 |
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| WOW - you dreamin about them Swedish nurses - again??!! |
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