|Reviewed by Tom Hyland
|GEORG - THIS PROVES IT!
YOU, YOU - DIRTY, DIRTY - OLD, OLD - MAN, MAN!
yer poor, dumb, younger BRO - 'WITLESS - MATCHLESS - MATLACK'
thinks yer story is 'bout dental hygiene -
n' he's waitin' fer the 'TOOTH FAIRY!"
DUH? CUZ TK ... 'CAVITY FILLER EXTRA-ORDINAIRE!'
|Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
|So much said in such a few words. Amazing.|
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|WOW! and...WHAMY! You are so precisely imaginative with your words. Woak of art, Georg!
Blessings and Love - Micke
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Have you been groping those nurses again mister? Be careful they outnumber you and that blue pill can only do so much. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Roger Ochs
|Gulp! You've invented an answer to Haiku and you are its Master. Gassho.|
|Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
|WOW!! This is a fantastic visual!!! Excellent four lines about lust!! Your friend, ~Chessly|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Whoaaaaaaaaaaa..now ya talking darlin..LOL....Hugss|
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|I think your poem should be in Webster's Dictionary. It certainly is the most descriptive meaning of the word. Whew! Spoken like a man who's been there. lol
God bless you,
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|i've watched movies like this.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
This definatly captured the lust side of it, not sure about the love side but then the line between the two is often blurred isn't it?
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I never knew cavities wanted or needed love, the very next time I have a toothache I will offer it love & such...;-) e|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Gee I thought everybody experienced that, guess not.|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|erect and at attention
and melting all over your "Four lines about Lust"
mix in some Love & now you're talkin my cup of hot steepin tea!!
Rolls In The Hay Bales
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|very interesting, what pills are you on my friend?
And what hospital are you in?
I know it's in Sweden, but my, this must be some therapy you're under.......
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Me oh My oh My oh Me....wow, this is steaming beauty~|
|Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
|I had to put my hands over my ears Georg. lol...J'nia, the innocent. lol again|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Georg, you have nicely displayed the joys of lust and love.
|Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
|Must really be feeling better...wow...lol...|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Georg, First let me tell you, by this poem, I know you are feeling better!!!! lol
I find this so beautifully erotic..Especially the last line.
Good to see you are doing much better.
Much peace, love and light and to lust!
|Reviewed by Joel Sattler
|Being a dirty old man is no picnic!
I oughta know....
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|WOW - you dreamin about them Swedish nurses - again??!!|