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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
6/28/2010 |
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Amen, Patrick! We are all the same....lovely write!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
6/27/2010 |
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| Nicely done Patrick. Great poetry. |
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| Reviewed by Chessly Nesci |
6/27/2010 |
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| I couldn't agree more! Great poem Patrick! |
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| Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins |
6/27/2010 |
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| Ain't that the truth! |
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| Reviewed by Eileen Granfors |
6/27/2010 |
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| Beautiful visions of the eye, heart, and mind, Patrick. |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/27/2010 |
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Clearly a poem of deep vision. Joining the colors of the rainbow in their home has enlightened me.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
6/27/2010 |
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| Sadly what Ed says is true, myself included. Working through one's own hypocrisy is a lifetime's chore. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Donna Chandler |
6/27/2010 |
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A colorless rainbow. What a wonderful vision you've brought with your words.
Donna |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
6/27/2010 |
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| Colorless rainbows? Maybe that's what I've been missing out on. Every one of us is different, every one of us the same? All these contradictions and yet the message comes through loud and clear. Well said, sir. Thanks, Dick |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
6/27/2010 |
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Miserable wet after the storm comes the regret of never have thought of bringing an umbrella with you...
Georg
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/26/2010 |
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Each and every one of us is different
Each and every one of us the same
To let colors come between us
Puts each and every one of us to shame
I appreciate and agree with the opinion that you have shared via your verses here, Patrick. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
6/26/2010 |
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Wonderful poem Patrick ~ wise words
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by pat medlin |
6/26/2010 |
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| hmmmm...thinking about ed's honest words.....wonder what inspired this...wonderin about a 'colorless' rainbow...only because i just wrote about its different hues...but not with the same conotations...enjoyed the jolt into thinking a little deeper...pat |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
6/26/2010 |
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Great lesson in this write, Patrick. Very well done, my friend.
God bless. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/26/2010 |
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Wonderful work, Patrick, and that piccy looks like a StormSpinner (Karla) type of photo! Very nice; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
6/26/2010 |
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| So true, but even those of us who profess to be color blind and not prejudice, are still so at times in our lives...ed |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
6/26/2010 |
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Perfect. An understanding that it takes hard work to arrive at a place of value on the spiritual color scale and arrive at the top rung, and stay on the top rung in good graces. Thought-provoking and earnest in delivery, the message is clear, Patrick. Your work has come full circle, something to be proud of.
Love,
Sage |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
6/26/2010 |
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A great tune Patrich, can we include the loon?
Hugs! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Carin Spirit |
6/26/2010 |
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| Amen to this. So very well written. Warmth and Love to you, Patrick. |
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