Four Lines About Fireworks
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Friday, July 02, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Blooming on ebon skies,
nightflowers on stalks of
light --- how I love the
color that fills my eyes!
(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (4/2)
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|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Beautiful picture. The poem goes nicely with it, Karla. Hugs,
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Cool. Pom Poms ablaze. Fireworks are a personal fave. Patrick|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A fantastic four lines Karla! You really are good at this!|
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Great, Karla! and you taught me a new word, ebon. Thank you for not putting a y on it; I was forced to look it up in the dictionary.
Your picture sure does present it as a fluorescent flower. Beautiful and exciting; fireworks rock!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Amazing how a British tradition has carried over the pond. Guy Fawlkes can't have been so bad?|
|Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
|Isn't it just exhilarating?|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|...but then again, if you are a bird that ain't no fun!!!(LOL)
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|What a beautiful photo to go with your beautiful poem, Karla!|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful and probably why they catch our attention every time too, ENJOY!
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Beautiful picture!!... and your poem fits it perfectlyy!!!|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Yes you have to love fireworks...they paint the skies in living rainbows...
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Well done, Karla.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|"Blooming on ebon skies/
nightflowers on stalks of/
light --- how I love the/
color that fills my eyes!"
Awesome poem, Karla; the joy in this practically EXPLODES off the page ... just like a Fourth of July firework! Well done, and love the piccy! Happy July Fourth to YOU and thank YOU for serving our country! *SALUTE*
*Boom Booms! I LOVE that sound!* (And I DO!)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Donna Chandler
|beautiful picture to go with nicely descriptive words.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack