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Four Lines About Love
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Wednesday, July 07, 2010
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It makes me young again,
knowing that the universe
spins around me --- this
must be what God felt like.

(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (7/7)

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Reviewed by Rose Rideout 7/12/2010
Bewutiful Karla.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 7/11/2010
I can't even imagine how He felt. A nice poem, Karla. Hugs,
Sheila
Reviewed by Andy Turner 7/10/2010
It takes a lifetime to learn how to be young.
And daughter you have learned very fast.

Wise Master Andy.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 7/10/2010
I have just read J'nia's latest poem about children and flying and to me, your verses are along the same theme. You remind me of being carefree like a child. Lovely stuff, Karla. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by William Bonilla 7/9/2010
Four lines and a brilliant thought
Love & Peace


William
Reviewed by JMS Bell 7/8/2010
COMING 'IN TUNE' WITH THE WONDER OF 'HIS' AWESOME CREATIONS; THE HEAVENS AND THE EARTH...DOES 'LIFT' OUR SPIRITS HIGH AND ONE CAN FEEL BRAND NEW...YOUNG AGAIN. AND THIS WORK MAKES ME THINK, KARLA, ALMIGHTY GOD WHO LOVES US...CREATED ALL THE EARTH FOR YOU AND I. WONDERFUL SHARING...THANKS MUCH AND BLESSINGS, LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 7/8/2010
Karla this poem actually gave me chills, it's brilliant!
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 7/8/2010
A great picture, Karla!! I love your poem too. It inspires me!!

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 7/8/2010
Love is a many splendored thing.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 7/8/2010
Once one hit rock bottom...the only way left is up. Well done!

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 7/7/2010
Karla, this gave me such a beautiful feeling inside.......this is one of your best and I'm placing it into my library. Four beautifully expressed lines!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/7/2010
Fantastic four lines ,Karla!Deep thinking!
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 7/7/2010
Love does have a way of affecting the equilibrium. Patrick
Reviewed by Jon Willey 7/7/2010
Karla, "this must be what God feels like", for he is the epicenter of all love -- may peace and love be always with you my dear friend -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by Paul Berube 7/7/2010
Well done, Karla.
Reviewed by john zimmerman 7/7/2010
elegant simply elegant and somewhat unexpected giveb the title

good write1

JOHN+
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 7/7/2010
Eloquent ~ Your poem reminds me of freedom within the art of spinning ~ each moment, just as that moment should be
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang 7/7/2010
Beautiful poem. You are so correct!
Becca
Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat 7/7/2010
Karla,

Short, sweet and to the point. Excellent poem, is this what God felt like..hmm.

Mary
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 7/7/2010
I get such a wonderful feeling when I read this, Karla! How awesome is that?! Maybe because it reminds me of when I was young and would stand on a hill with arms open and feel the wind. Thank you, Karla! :)
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 7/7/2010
Beautiful thoughts to complement a gorgeous picture.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 7/7/2010
lovely!
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 7/7/2010
Beautiful and inspiring, Karla, and the piccy is perfect! AWESOME job here; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D



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