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In the Flowers of Love
by Dayvid Graybill
Thursday, July 08, 2010
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Written for the angel in my life, who showers me with indescribable love!


In the Flowers of Love

 

It’s not what I wanted to do

But I did it anyway

She played with the art of my mind

Then opened her heart for me to see.

 

One of many

She danced on the head of my pin

While Aquinas looked on from beyond

Her fingers running through her hair.

 

It’s not what I wanted to do

But she took my hand showing me the way

Peeling off layers toward nakedness

She lay surrounded by flowers of love.

 

Movement expired

But for the sound of wings in my ears

Stillness and naked body beauty intertwined

A tear formed slowly in the corner of her eye.

 

It’s not what I wanted to do

Her intense desire hot as a brand in fire

Softly she touched my hand to her breast

I bent, kissing her slowly from head to toe.

 

Opening her all

Seeing clearly what was never seen

She encircled my body with her spirit

And took me to her home in the sky.

 

It’s everything I wanted to do.

 

 

 

© 2010 Dayvid Graybill

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Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald 8/11/2010
Beautifully done

hug
kathy
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 7/9/2010
great romantic verse big D
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 7/9/2010
Dayvid:

This is soooo beautiful a moment!!! Well-captured in the wonderment of your pen!! I greatly enjoyed this!!

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 7/9/2010
'And took me to her home in the sky'--------- BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 7/8/2010
Beautiful, romantic, tender and sensual.
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle 7/8/2010
Indeed, the tenderness, sensuality, and structure of this poem tell an incredible tale of love. You are a lucky one, for sure. I'm happy to have found your work.

Jill
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 7/8/2010
Fantastic Dayvid, when you have love you are a lucky one.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 7/8/2010
utterly moving with tenderness & loving emotions Dayvid
I love so many of your phrases too:

"She played with the art of my mind

Then opened her heart for me to see."

we all bend to our knees to such beauty of love
Spirits Rising Entwined
Vickie

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 7/8/2010
Angel indeed. Romantic excellence abounds here. Patrick
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 7/8/2010
You are a lucky man, Dayv...and she a lucky woman...ed
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 7/8/2010
This poem is incredible Dayvid!!!!
What a stunning poem from start to finish ~
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 7/8/2010
beautiful write summed up so well!
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