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by Patrick A Granfors
Friday, July 09, 2010
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Aberration denied

Cold sweat ensues

Premonition envelops

You knew it all along


Weary conscience collapses

Into the reality of conscious deception

The door is locked and sealed

The bars no longer illusion


The darkness steals a victim

Cries in the void

Silence in tune with its echo



Mind thread slackens

Dangling over the abyss

Searching for a spool

Needle’s first calling


Spool turns as threads tighten

Whispers ring past the quiet lie

Needle replies

Oblivion serves her master



Copyright 2010 Patrick Granfors







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Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill 7/10/2010
The progression is horribly wonderful! Good work!

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER 7/10/2010
Pray the prey dead it stay, darkness weaves its own design, for all that needle sews a suit for all to fit and wear, too much weight that's on the brain, will drive a man insane, or the devil to skate on thin ice. Hugs! Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 7/10/2010
Dark and Haunting, Indeed.
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 7/10/2010
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Paul Berube 7/10/2010
Excellent, Patrick.
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 7/9/2010
Dark, foreboding, enchanting. I love it!!!
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 7/9/2010
Wise is the shapeshifter who comes from centuries ago where she learned the deceivers ways. The she-owl has chosen her alliances well to defend against territorial invasion. Aberration is indeed, a remnant scribe from the leftover attempt of recruit of the evil talon of the interloper, and perhaps portrays itself as something so much more than poetry can give on this plane of life...intuition is more than a word, it's a savior and the wise owl knows it, Patrick.

Love and Respect,
Reviewed by John Bidwell 7/9/2010
Quite a ride- like a haunted hay ride.
I'll get on again.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen 7/9/2010
Ooh, this is intricately woven Patrick!
Threaded with deep haunting words and ideas ~
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 7/9/2010
Darkly dangerous. I like the mystery.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack 7/9/2010
What mainstream, this is kinda horror scary to me...or I read it wrong, but to each their own idea...ed
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