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Serenity and Peace in the Throes of Passion
by Dayvid Graybill

Saturday, July 10, 2010
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Two of my fantasies wrapped up in one.


Serenity and Peace in the Thoes of Passion

 

Huge mansion on the hill

Long straight driveway lined

Bentleys, Rolls, Ferraris, and Maybachs

Dealing men, women, countries, and banks.

 

Oilmen spilling black semen

Bankers with mouths wide open

Powerful presidents limp and watching

Ms Alaska whores her beautiful body to the camera.

 

The key was in the door

That opened to the hidden room

Party of the world grew hot and wild

Cash, power, and orgies deeply entwined.

 

And then…

 

Beautifully filled with passion

By graceful steps Serenity moved

Across the lawn to the tall front door

In all her elegance and beauty moved inside.

 

Her presence in the midst of din

Stifled gasps out of dark corners

Every man frantically tried to do her

She waved them all away with her kindness.

 

Women she called on

Dancing with each and every one

She found her perfectly disguised lover

Eyes locked, fingers playfully touching her body

 

Mayhem slowly mellowed

As her hand turned rusted the key

Door swung open, she slipped inside

With Peace, her lover, hearts in rhythm beating.

 

Serenity and Peace on the hidden bed

Sensually deep in love, mansion stilled

Softly they touched, fiery tongues probing

Arching and aching, wet pleasure spots meeting

 

Higher and higher they lifted

Each other into moaning clouds

The band silent, the party stopped

Watching the keyhole’s brilliant white glow.

 

Cash, power, and orgies expiring

No longer hold control or meaning

Hearts smolder warmly, spirits interwoven

Oilmen, bankers, the powerful receive their sight.

 

Economies soar, nations thrive

Guests find in each other eternal Love

Driveway filled, orphans, hungry, and widows

Singing Peace and Serenity’s song of ecstatic love.

 

Mortgages paid in full

Dependence on oil dissolves

All national borders fade into universal love

Peace and Serenity in the throes of passion reign.

 

 

 

2010 © Dayvid Graybill

 

 

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Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald 8/11/2010
Very well done indeed

hug
Kathy
Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader) 7/27/2010
Man, you would truly make God angry at you for having such a long list, but He would probably say, after such a good read: Hey, sense you wrote this all so well ... OK! Granted! This is very interesting and causes me to constantly track my thoughts as I read. Very well, written, and equally well received. Thanks Dayvid.
Reviewed by Don Juan Amante 7/23/2010
a very unusual and thoughtful pen. well done.
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 7/13/2010
they are female too...
yes indeed they are...
this is a wonderful creative expressions Dayvid
and if you don't mind
I am stuck on this:
"Serenity and Peace on the hidden bed

Sensually deep in love, mansion stilled

Softly they touched, fiery tongues probing

Arching and aching, wet pleasure spots meeting"


Love Songs Erupting...
Vickie

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 7/12/2010
Love the metaphor!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo 7/12/2010
Brilliant use of metaphor throughout! An extraordinary, contemporary, and timely piece! Super fine write! ~Elizabeth
Reviewed by JMS Bell 7/11/2010
NEVER QUITE HAD IT DEPICTED IN THIS WAY...BUT TRULY THIS IS WHAT THE WORLD DOES NEED, TRULY WHAT THE WORLD DOES NOT HAVE...'HIS' PEACE AND 'HIS' SERENITY...COMING TOGETHER(WHICH CAN ONLY HAPPEN WHEN 'HE' IS ACKNOWLEDGED) AND RESOLUTELY SOLVING EVERY ONE OF THE WORLDS PROBLEMS. WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS,

JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 7/11/2010
That's quite a fantasy you have there but I'm not holding my breath waiting the oilmen and bankers and the powerful to see the light. Patrick
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 7/10/2010
A wise man's vision!
This is faultless Dayvid ~ Pour me some more wine?
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Andy Turner 7/10/2010
The last 4 or 3 stanzas are outstanding as that is how life needs to be.
Rather than the creed of greed.
To see all borders fall has to come somewhen.
As a kid I'd look at the moon when astronauts were on it and ask dad why can they go anywhere on the moon yet we have to stay in one part of the earth. May be BP = Broken Pipes will move us forward. We can but hope.

TY
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 7/10/2010
I loved the line about Ms.Alaska. I disagree with her on just about everything but she is very hot!! This writing Dayvid was much more than about Sarah. It was extremely well crafted and easy to read.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY



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