by Ronald W. Hull
Sunday, July 11, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Dancing in the Moonlight
© Dee McCartney
The other side of the moon.
If only this once to have a chance,
if only you'd take my hand in dance.
This once, this last chance, intrance,
you'd call, enthrall, that's all, this chance.
Off into the dark of night,
your body feels so right,
as I hold you so tight.
and we become one in flight.
Escaping the thought of alone,
under the pale moonlight, ‘til dawn.
So take my hand and dance,
until the pain is gone,
and, I awaken from the dance.
Copyright 2010 © Ronald W. Hull
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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Dreamily captivating and lovely, Ron. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Life's a dance. Love it.|
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Sometimes wakin' up is hard to do. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Vesper Darby
|Just beautiful ron...a thrice read for me....patmedlin|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Yes I agree with Eileen, dreames can take you to great things. You did a great job with this write, Ron.
GOD BLESS YOU
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Lovely surreal poem,Ron,dreams are magical!|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Ron, the world of dreams is truly a magical, mystical place. There, we all can dance until the pain is no more. A blessing that affords us an often needed reprieve from the world of reality. May joy, peace and love be always with you my friend. Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|I use to really cut a rug, but not anymore.
Delightful dance dream Ronald.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|I enjoyed your wistful and charming poem~
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|YES...IT IS IN SLEEP THAT WE ARE HEALED OF SO MANY EMOTIONAL AND MENTAL ANGUISHES. WONDROUS, GOD GIVEN, SLEEP! WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Would that you could dance the good dance instead of fighting the bad fight...(now what the hell is that supposed to mean...LOL?)|