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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
8/4/2010 |
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Darn it! Hate it when that happens.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
7/15/2010 |
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| THIS IS 'YOU' EILEEN....EXQUISITE! THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
7/15/2010 |
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| I love the cloud in a race image. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
7/15/2010 |
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Kn ow exactly what you mean
Well Penned
Love & peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
7/15/2010 |
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I'm a random windstorm.... LOL I've always loved the imagery you write with!
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
7/14/2010 |
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A thought released is a boomerang
It'll rattle around and make a bang
The clutter's helpless against the noise
Thought recovered and expressed with poise
Patrick |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/14/2010 |
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| superb expression of a thought's journey ... |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
7/13/2010 |
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| we hope bad thoughts get lost or disappear Eileen,good one. cheeerio |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
7/13/2010 |
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| Excellent, Eileen! Wonderful capture of that which each one of us knows sooooooooooooo well! Love the light and airiness to this, just like that wayward feather-thought. I don't think it's lost at all... just lining the brain's nest to hatch a fresh brood of fertile poetic ET chicklets! :)) xx |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
7/13/2010 |
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| Maybe it's not lost, but being stored, for a future day. I bet those birds know! |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
7/12/2010 |
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| Oh, Eileen, can I ever relate! |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
7/12/2010 |
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| Just thinking about somethings adds to the waste!! |
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| Reviewed by Jacqueline Hallenbeck |
7/12/2010 |
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| "It gets lost in the clutter of my brain" <-- very nice! The whole piece, actually. <3 |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
7/12/2010 |
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Tell me about it! I can so relate to this, Eileen, so relate...and how well you put it, calmly, gently and with poignancy.
John |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
7/12/2010 |
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Who knows where thoughts come from or whence they will go. Clutter of your brain, or in your warm heart. NIce thought, these thoughts.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
7/12/2010 |
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You are not alone. Somehow many thoughts float away as the day takes hold and the mind becomes cluttered with daily chores, but it will return again...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
7/12/2010 |
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Dear Lady Eileen, I cannot imagine anything in your mind as clutter. As always thanks for sharing your brilliance.
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY |
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| Reviewed by Roger Ochs |
7/12/2010 |
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| Your whimsical approach to an issue is priceless. |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
7/12/2010 |
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| this made me smile |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
7/12/2010 |
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A lost thought could not be described any better than you have done.
George |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
7/12/2010 |
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| Eileen, I see that I am not alone when I attempt to recapture a poetic moment if I am without pen and paper. In those moments I have found that the thought and the essence are forever lost in another segment of time I am unable to recapture. Frustrating. May peace and love be always with you my dear friend. Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
7/12/2010 |
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Eileen, you are making me jealous, you can write such beautiful lines, with clutter on the brain, darn it what happened to mine, I could well imagine had you mind been clear ha, Hugs!
Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
7/12/2010 |
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| lol Good one, Eileen. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
7/12/2010 |
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Very good write, Eileen; well done! Hope you are doing well! Still praying for you, girl~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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