They've Barred the Bard
by Kimmy Van Kooten
Tuesday, July 13, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Bite the bight and be the bee to birth your berth, worthy of, bard...
Not to shoot the chute, but
They've barred the bard!
All eyes counted the ayes and its official!
Arms raised, were razed. . . his rood, too rude. . .
What pours from his pores poules in his pools. . .
E'er to lay in the lye to lie. . .
No intension's; no intentions
Thus, when inveighed, we must invade!
Indicting those inditing. . .
To know, “No, the hoe is not to hoa!
Only a loan to the lone. . . a hymn to him!"
“Oh sear, O' seer!
Like the sea, here . . . See hear!
The cession in your session to pen, will last only as long as
it takes you to pried you of your pride,
and, take a good peek at your peaks. . .
Reek what wreaks!
Right your writes!"
But until that day arrives, the vise to vice will white this wight,
or sight, to ne'er cite again!
Kimmy Van Kooten
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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I love the way that you weave words, Kimmy; so clever. Thank you for sharing your wit and humor. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Very well done indeed sweet lady..stay safe and well..Hugssss|
|Reviewed by Fallen Sword
|As always, up to your fascinating word-tricks! Conga Kimmy strikes again! I love it :)
When you get a moment, drop over to the Message Forum on TWF, where this poem has received some cool comments. I especially like the one by Lauretta Scalzo [sp?] who has even read Chaucer. She is a new TWF member, too.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Aye tooka looka at the peaks and knew why they barred the bard.
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|This took a lot of thought to put down. It is a clever play on words, and it made me smile. Something I haven't done in a while. Thank you sharing these baring lines.
May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie
|Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
|Extremely clever. Please don't tell me it just flew from your head onto the page. I'll so so jealous if you do. Well done. Hugs, J|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Kimmy, your words are filled with repetittve refinement...well done!
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|We must expose the light of day to truth which has been denied us. Well done.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Cutte Kimmy wimmy, lovey dovey write...
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Kimmy gone quirky, wordkinky, quacky, but not tacky; flimflammy fabuloso fantastiK...
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Holy Wholly! What a deucy doozy! Pairs of pears juicy fruit froot loops of poetry, Kimmy. Entertaining at least this leased site on AD!
Love & Luv,