by David Maclellan
Friday, July 16, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Bridges are burning all around me
My anger has turned to ash
Regrets turn to memories
But there are circles that are not complete
Forgive me for the damage
I tried desperately to heal the dream
You couldn't let me
You wouldn't let me
My shrine is burning
My world is on fire
I want the flames to end
When the wall is gone I can move forward
Ash at my back
Resurrection to the living dead
Scars will form
Pain will subside
Love will reside
All will abide
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|Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
|The only thing you can do is say sorry for your mistakes. You did that and the wall should come tumbling down. You tried desperately to heal the dream and that is all you can do my friend. We all have to forgive before the pain goes away...Very heartfelt write! Take care, and god bless! ~Chessly|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Highly charged, David, and very worthwhile.
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|This is so utterly emotionally charged
and releasing too in such a revealing fashion
we all build walls..and stones & bricks
one by one they go up
and one by one they can be removed
however..in this I like to climb walls
well I just do lets say...
May Forgiveness Always Sow
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Deeply emotional write, David. Well penned!
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|David, I can sense the pain within your lines...powerfully written...as always, your words make me "feel." Your pain has given you a gift...the gift of being a poet.|
|Reviewed by Sabine Hahn (Reader)
|Long time ago this one .... burning bridges again, are you?|