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When I'm Around You
by Aqil Salil

Friday, July 16, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I've never known a love
     to have the scent of a rose

but this 
     is what I sense

When I'm Around You

I can only gawk and stare
    for these eyes
        must have been blind

but...behold the sight in front of me
only beauty can I see

When I'm Around You

How the Heavens must have opened
    and let a Cherub escape
        to the hills of my ears

but I swear,
    it's the voice of an angel

A melodic symphony I hear

When I'm Around You


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Reviewed by JMS Bell 7/18/2010
WELL DONE WITH WONDERFUL IMAGERY AND GOOD RECURRING RHYME SCHEME. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 7/18/2010
Sighhhh...Beautiful writing sweet man..stay safe and well..Hugss
Reviewed by David Maclellan 7/16/2010
A beautiful love poem Jamal, you are really smitten!
Warm regards,
David
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