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Shadowdreams (Limbo breached)
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Is this reality?
Is this someone's dreamscape?
Am I here or is this my dream?

Shadows dance around when I look about. Reality shifts, that when I shake my head 2 look up again, the sky has reformed, the road is a different pavement, yet all around me are not.

Dreams of reality, dreams 2 escape, dreams of happiness, even of the shadows within me. Am I here or is this a dream. The different planes, worlds, or realities if u will.

Even, focused, the mind is unclear & my eyes see more than shadows, more than dreams, more than what the mind & eye show me. I have seen them, breached them.

Everthing fades, no longer can I speak, no longer can I reach, I breathe, I open my eyes, but the pictures are of a different reality. Limbo maybe?

I close my eyes, focus, my mind is clear, its shifting, yet the dreams appear 2 be opposite, the shadows are my minds thoughts, I can't speak of them, they fade if I do.

Is this reality?
Is this someone's dreamscape?
Am I here or is this my dream?

These are my mind's dreams shadowed, these are the dream shadows of me, awake & asleep.

Believe me, time has shown me limbo breached, but only in these fortelling, cumbersome shadow dreams.


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Reviewed by Shameka Robertson
try to proof read before you post p;anes no no planes yes yes ha ha ha !!!
Reviewed by Maria
I am really enjoying your work, will be reading a lot more of it!

Thank you for sharing your creativity!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
I like this, it unfolds layer after layer and raises some realistic questions about reality until the reader may no longer be sure. Excellent work, so creative.
Reviewed by Kacie Rahm
You never cease to produce things in whatever way you want.
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
hard to tell sometimes....choppy flow but original in your style...* Reilly has a story up on the story board that deals with this same topic
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