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Shadowdreams (Limbo breached)
by Avatar 319

Thursday, September 26, 2002

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Is this reality?
Is this someone's dreamscape?
Am I here or is this my dream?

Shadows dance around when I look about. Reality shifts, that when I shake my head 2 look up again, the sky has reformed, the road is a different pavement, yet all around me are not.

Dreams of reality, dreams 2 escape, dreams of happiness, even of the shadows within me. Am I here or is this a dream. The different planes, worlds, or realities if u will.

Even, focused, the mind is unclear & my eyes see more than shadows, more than dreams, more than what the mind & eye show me. I have seen them, breached them.

Everthing fades, no longer can I speak, no longer can I reach, I breathe, I open my eyes, but the pictures are of a different reality. Limbo maybe?

I close my eyes, focus, my mind is clear, its shifting, yet the dreams appear 2 be opposite, the shadows are my minds thoughts, I can't speak of them, they fade if I do.

Is this reality?
Is this someone's dreamscape?
Am I here or is this my dream?

These are my mind's dreams shadowed, these are the dream shadows of me, awake & asleep.

Believe me, time has shown me limbo breached, but only in these fortelling, cumbersome shadow dreams.




-319


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Reviewed by Shameka Robertson 12/6/2002
nice
try to proof read before you post p;anes no no planes yes yes ha ha ha !!!
Reviewed by Maria 10/6/2002
I am really enjoying your work, will be reading a lot more of it!

Thank you for sharing your creativity!

Maria
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 10/5/2002
I like this, it unfolds layer after layer and raises some realistic questions about reality until the reader may no longer be sure. Excellent work, so creative.
Reviewed by Kacie Rahm 9/27/2002
You never cease to produce things in whatever way you want.
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 9/26/2002
hard to tell sometimes....choppy flow but original in your style...* Reilly has a story up on the story board that deals with this same topic
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