|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|good one William, reminds me of this blues song, which goes, I'm going to lay my head on that old railwood iron, then let the 319 train peacefy my mind, I'm going down by the river, going sit in my rocking chair, then rock myself on away from here. Kind of sad but I listen to it all the time, forget than train action though, take care|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|I too have to smile when I read this delightful poem, we know that we are young at heart...but in the eyes of our grandchildren, who knows what they see...good one, William
peace and love, Carole~
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Never grow old. Use the rocking chair for firewood and the behave as a preteen should.|
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|you sound like a great grampa|
|Reviewed by Inspire Hope
|Lol!!!! William I really appreciate this poem today!
Thanks for sharing.....excellent!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Yea... can so relate to this one especially when my six year showed up the other night missing her front tooth and asking Poppy to play catch with her. lol
|Reviewed by John Domino
|Yes William, we are clowns to our grandkids my friend but we are mentors as well. One GREAT write! As your grandkids get older they will appreciate this kind of writing even more.
john Michael Domino
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|You go William, Lady Ga Ga would be proud of you...You rock in my book, so never settle for less than what you can handle..
Love this poem..
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|A nice tribute, William. Sweet:)
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|They 'rock' our world :) Mine will be one and three in October..love this write William..love and blessings
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|I'm sitting here with a smile on my face after reading this. I love it!|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|THANK GOD FOR GRANDCHILDREN THAT DISPEL ANY IDEAS OF 'GROWING OLD'...WITHOUT A FIGHT (SMILE). GOOD WORK THAT WAS ENJYOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESSING. LOVE AND BLESSINGS,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Mary Coe
|Your poem is so true. I have nine grandchildren and I'm always on the go to some event or playing games with them. I used to tell myself, I'm going to relax in my old age, it never happened.|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Staying young at heart, William, that's the spirit.
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|William, some days relaxing in a rocking chair is a really good thing.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I don't have any grand children yet(?) but your write makes a lot of sense to me anyway, William. Thank you. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|My great grand kids who live about 5 miles from me are a handful when they stop over. Never used to fall asleep but catch myself dozing now and then. No rocking chair yet. Good poem William|