|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Happy Birthday, Youngster. The sparkle of life glows
in your lovely poetry. -gene.
|Reviewed by Jerry Engler
|Very good imagery, Dawn. You looked for the enchantment in life, and found it on one of those best of all days. Happy birthday....Jerry|
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|A charming story, Dawn. These are the moments that count. Your sentiments come through beautifully here.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Belated happy birthday wishes to you, Dawn; and thank you for sharing this lovely gift/experience via your verses. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|yes it does, dawn. beautiful capture! happy birthday!
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|WHAT A BEAUTIFUL AND ENCHANTING PICTURE YOU'VE PAINTED...A LOVELY EXAMPLE OF HOW NATURE RESPONDS TO TENDERNESS AND LOVE AND YES, HOW THE SPARKLE OF LIFE AND CARING NEVER DIES. WHAT A MARVELOUS 'BIRTHDAY PRESENT' TO YOU. HAPPY BIRTHDAY, DAWN!!! AND MAY YOU CONTINUE TO BE BLESSED WITH THE GIFT OF WONDERFUL...'SUMMER MORNINGS'. THANK FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS TO YOU AND YOURS,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by jude forese
|lovely smooth poem ...|
|Reviewed by John Domino
|Wonderful poem concerning butterflies and birthdays. Happy 50th, if you are like me you celebrate all month. This way you can have several special birthday weekends to celebrate.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|How beautiful is this. Somehow it reminds me of the book, Eat, pray, love.
I have friends in Milan but I want to write and, fall in love in Tuscany. No idea why, but it has felt like my souls home!
I'll meet yer at the inn and have a month of lazy hazy summertime muse.
Top one Dawn! xxx
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Fifty-five years young, Dawn. Congratulations! And you invite us to celebrate with this perfectly delightful moment.
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|A wonderful birthday musing and epiphanic instant, Dawn. The quality and gift of this moment will stay with you forever, enriching your days. A very happy birthday to you - my son celebrated his 21st on Saturday so I can heartily relate to the spreading of wings! :)) Careful, thoughtful progression as always, x|
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|A terrific write to celebrate life. Happy birthday, Dawn. I have one coming up this month, too. I thank God for everyone of them--and for life.|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Wonderfully descriptive with a marvelous insight
|Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
|Ahhh! and the effect of this butterfly poem warms my heart. Refreshing and joyful. Thank you so much. J'nia|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Dawn, these are the moments that we live for...You deserve so much happiness and peace. I feel good things coming your way this next year.
I wish you peace, love and lightness, on your birthday..
Warmest hugs to you, my dear friend,
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|This is excellent Dawn. Really, really good writing. It's funny, I just had a butterfly poem/ thought in my head last night; but more in a metaophorical sense as it relates to poetry. Strange that.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|First of all let me wish you a belated but no less wonderful birthday wish to one of the great poets of AD. That being said this soft gentle life story lesson told so perfectly is the reason why you are such a wonderful poet.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|How beautiful! This is both wistful and deep, I could feel the open air, the butterfly's brush, the compassion in the summer light ~
Happy birthday to you Dawn, beautiful poetess of peace and wisdom!
Oh...And I was going to say that the sparkle of life is bright in your poetry, too!
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|Happy birthday, Dawn, and may your life always be filled with moments of beauty~|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A truly lovely poetic piece, Dawn. And what a truly marvelous way to spend a Birthday!|
|Reviewed by David Maclellan
|First, may I wish you a very happy birthday Dawn! Secondly, thank you for sharing this precious moment in your life, I could almost feel the Italian sun and the whisper of butterfly wings. So far removed from my particularly cold Aussie winter.
Bless you Dawn,
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Never saw a blue butterfly nor a poem as captivating as this beauty.
Happy 55th, a woman's true beauty begins to shine after 55. May you have many more happy ones.
|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|Beautiful portrayal of all that is beautiful, delicate and enduring. Happy Birthday, Dawn ~ may your upcoming year be full of all those things you most love and may your mind, heart and spirit overflow with peace and joy.|
|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|A beautiful poem of nature, Dawn|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Lightness and grace is captured within the lines of this stunner. To be as one with nature's fragile and beautiful creatures is to be blessed.|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Breathtaking images and emotions..wow Happy Birthday Dawn..yesterday my Aunt Flossie turned '100' so we had a big festive party :)
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|Happy Birthday- and many more as wonderful.
Nothing like the gift of a beautiful poem.
Thanks for sharing that.
Now how about some cake?
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY, DEAR DAWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|