restoring the jesus monument
suffering from corrosive
streaked with blue-green patina
the Ignorance from the veins in
his hands to the ribs in his socks
who fought, who bled,
who died, the corrosion
so obscure it'll take another
myth born for the holy restoration.
Copyright Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist
The Sundance Wives Official Monument
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|Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
|The power of myth kept Joseph alive...Campbell, that is. Mythic Mennonites muddle in make-believe.
Peace and good news,
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Internal corrosion shalt not disturb the patina. Myth or not. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|the ignorant will never cease to live & thrive
how great my own life would be if never myself
fell into the pith of ignorance and yet...also
as I discovered my own ignorance(s)
(holy shock city!)
what a great life I could have "had"
...yet what a great life I "live" because
I have discovered my own ignorance...
it is a blade we all have brandished
and we all have grown to discover it
and usually it is easier to see in others
over our own...
Love Your Deep Thoughts
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Makes me wonder, is it Jesus, or mans interpretation? Only recently is the truth beginning to surface, one tiny pearl at a time...
Be always safe,