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My Fault, My Fault, My Fault
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Thursday, August 05, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Image (c) 2010, Karen Vidra

can bend only so far
before breaking.  give and
give and give until i
can't give anymore.  been
building a long time, this
thunderstorm in my head -----
the winds of resentment
and anger about to
blow me away.  i will
never measure up to
standards of perfection,
what friends should be ----- always
my fault, my fault, my fault.
tired of always having
to apologize, tired
of being made to feel
like i'm the bad one here.

(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (8/5)


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Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 8/7/2010
You obviously need to run for political office. Then it's NEVER your fault! Patrick
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 8/5/2010
Why do you even worry? You know you are good person, now smile and be proud...

Be always safe,
Reviewed by Felix Perry 8/5/2010
Because we are all human, we tend to sometimes get on each others nerves and often the little things that are not addressed and confronted that build up to be the major disruptions to a friendship...maybe
Reviewed by David Maclellan 8/5/2010
Judging by the comments, you obviously have some dear and caring friends here at AD and I would like to be counted as one. Standards of perfection are subjective, and true friendship means never having to say sorry.

May blessings and sunshine come your way Karla,
Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat 8/5/2010

You shouldn't put yourself down so. I pray you come out of this depression soon. You are a wonderful lady, writer and friend, don't let anyone ever tell you different!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack 8/5/2010
Hey do I have to come down there and beat your butt...I KNOW you know better than to believe this, it must just be the extreme heat and just a build up of negative feelings...go to a church, kneel down and scream at the Lord, yes AT Him, He will understand your frustration and help you to remedy are as always in my prayers, dear one...ED
Reviewed by Donna Chandler 8/5/2010
You have put the perfect words to your frustration. Every year my New Year's Resolution is to not fret about the things I can't control. It's a work in progess always. We can NOT control the feelings of others, just how we react to them. Learning to love yourself is more important than the opinion of others.
Reviewed by john zimmerman 8/5/2010
KJ --o have captured the mood perfectly. It seems we've been working the same ground (see "The Imp" and "until the voices stop").

It is not your fault if oyhers are trying to stick it on you. keep well think good thoughts

good write!
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 8/5/2010
we can't control people, places, things. all you need to worry about is keeping your own side of the street clean. resentments are just left-over anger reheated for dinner. but the food sucks, if you know what i mean. just detach with love. it's all any of us can do. take care. wonderful writing, as always. you're very talented.
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 8/5/2010
I like the emotion and flow of this Karla !
I hope you do keep writing about it... your passion is effective!
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 8/5/2010
Powerful emotions here, Karla; let it all out, and don't hold back! Maybe it's best you stay away from your friend; she obviously doesn't appreciate you. I know I do! And I love you ... always have, always will!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( *tears!*

Praying hard for you today ...
Reviewed by Jon Willey 8/5/2010
Karla, let it out my friend. Assessing self blame is a difficult road to travel. We all tend to be far too critical of ourselves. Start to smile from down deep within that beautiful heart of yours and let it build until covers your face with joy. Banish the frowns and critical thoughts. May joy,love and peace overwhelm you my dear friend. Jon Michael
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 8/5/2010
Such strong emotion expressed in this Karla...and I can understand well.
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