Sarsen and Blue
by Kimmy Van Kooten
Friday, August 06, 2010
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I rested on the Sarsen and Blue. . .
Hung from an everlasting Yew,
And lied, mind-naked with the “Assedone’s”. . .
Through the sunny spokes, out from under the lintels, dark
I slaked them . . . them, and them there, Beaker Folk
(In the light, no one knew of the Druid!)
In this chron, unknown
Somehow, I could see them all rolling stones. . .
Heeling, my way, down an Avenue…
They placed their rocks
Measured, precisely put
Eight feet in the ground, viewing, twenty-two foot!
What was it, of Merlin, they wrote?
Over the sea, a wizard flew these rooks?
Well, it was a long-haired Gryphon, who locked earth’s door-bolt!
Many dug their barrows. . .
No cures to quote!
For years in address, until the altar stained red. . .
She laid in sacrifice on the Cosheston Bed. . .
And split all their artifacts!
Who knew of this Archer who slept
With his flints and child?
His key is on file!
Soon, he, nor Earth, will no longer rest quiet!
The Trees will speak of YOU!
And, of the Sarsen and Blue. . .
And me!. . . And we will ALL see how her song will lift stone!
With the matter from the midden, before every soul is lost!
Then, the planet opened up!
Kimmy Van Kooten
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|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|A beautiful write Kimmy as usual you take us into your words.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by John Domino
|A timeless message! This was the "Right Time" for me to hear it!
John Michael Domino
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Deep and mystic. Wonderful rhyme and flow. A joy to read.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|stimulating and fascinating work indeed ...|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Amazing what images an olde castle make! And the Earth did what?
|Reviewed by pat medlin
|hmmm...i'll need a minor mind adjustment for this one but i liked your expressive way with words that flowed me along...even if i really didn't know where...nice kimmy|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Mystical engineering and Kimmy's magic words - absolute wonder!
|Reviewed by Lew Duffey
|A beautiful write. Expanding the mind faster than the mind can expand.
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
Your talent soars in this unique write.
Great view of Stonehenge.
Peace 2 U ...
|Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
|Kimmy, This isn't like you
Very different and new.
And I like it too.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I find this topic fascinating, Kimmy. Thank you for opening my mind to wonder. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|Love this, Kimmy.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Kimmmy you tranported my soul and spirit back into the days of yore as mysticism, and paganism were not eveil words but words of unity with mother earth...well written indeed.