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Eyes Desire
by Kathleen L. McDonald

Sunday, August 08, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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a structured poem I enjoy doing.(etheree)I did this one and won a contest with it.


This
Can not
Be fulfilled
In your life time
For life is too short
And man is too greedy
Not to take more than he needs
From all that is given freely
While he can fulfill his eyes desire
Putting out a heart that is unfired

 

 

 

Often man is tempted by desires
 Doing him more harm than any good
Make his onward path dark and dank
Peace and joy lost to him now
As he travels his path
Alone unhappy
He can now see
Life can be
Joyous
Free

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Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill 8/13/2010
Nice structure that flows with its own transition. Good write!

Peace,
Dayvid
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 8/11/2010
Uniquely structured with a meaningful message; thank you, Kathi. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Felix Perry 8/9/2010
Great job and well formatted as well as strong emotional message of the life we all tend to live...
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Reviewed by Christine Tsen 8/8/2010
This is really neat! Both the words and the form of it ~
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by George Carroll 8/8/2010
An interlude with a joyous ending. Nicely done.
Reviewed by Koyel Mitra 8/8/2010
Hi Kathleen enjoyed reading this double ethere poem.Great work.



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