|Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
|Nice structure that flows with its own transition. Good write!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Uniquely structured with a meaningful message; thank you, Kathi. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Great job and well formatted as well as strong emotional message of the life we all tend to live...
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|This is really neat! Both the words and the form of it ~
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|An interlude with a joyous ending. Nicely done.|
|Reviewed by Koyel Mitra
|Hi Kathleen enjoyed reading this double ethere poem.Great work.|