|Reviewed by Ian Irvine (Hobson)
|The controlling image of orange juice works well with the free verse format and modernist/existentialist thematics (reminds me of the mood opening Notes From the Underground). I like the Spleen of this piece - honest and authentic. Nice work there Dayvid!|
|Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
|Forget about the alignment; you seem to be putting it out like it would have come out. Although, I do prefer a black russian over many things. No, really, I drink seldom; but that is one of my favorites along with the screwdrivers. I can't seem to pick up the pen when I indulge, however. On the subject, it is nice to purposely do things differently on occasion, and sometimes let things go. I dig the loose feel of this writing, Dayvid. Thanks for sharing.|
|Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
|Smiles, raise your glass high!! well done
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Screwdriver is my favorite drink, just two of them and I can let the rest of the world go by>>>, you haven't lost your words!|
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Hair of the dog old friend, helps to form words but it hurts to speak them out loud. Try a bacon sandwich. Ptrick|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|how clever Dayvid!!
I like tequilas & orange liquors though myself
with cranberry, fresh limes & fresh oranges
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|ah, screwdrivers making all seem better!|
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Sounds like a fuzzy navel instead of a fuzzy head, Pastor...maybe a trip to the pulpit and a sermon on Dirty Laundry will help...look up Don Henley and Eagles on the Internet and call it Rock and Roll!
Love and Full Hasselblads,
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Dayvid, how about try OJ and Champagne. Then make a toast to a well-deserved lie in for the day and recover sans guilt, in style!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|O.J. and Vodka sound very good to me, right now.|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|I don't drink much but a glass of oj and a shot of vodka sounds really good right now..Vanilla vodka would make it taste like a creamsickle.. Sounds good..
Hope things get better for you.
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|OJ & Vodla can help anybody develop words, just sometimes its hard to spelll them...;-)e|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Inspiration comes in odd ways and forms at times. Thanks for sharing, Dayvid. Love and peace to you,