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Orange Juice
by Dayvid Graybill
Sunday, August 08, 2010
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Okay...I'm digging deep here inside my slump. Where did all my words go? I just cant get them to line up anymore!


Orange Juice

 

Its all so surreal

so I didn’t shave this morning

and the potato chips I dropped on the floor

and the Hasselblads I looked up on the net

and even tho I did my laundry today

I am wearing dirty clothes

 

I move my head and see things slowly

I wish I had more chips

this poem isn’t turning out

the way I thought it would

but orange juice and vodka

help put it all together.

 

2009 © Dayvid Graybill

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Reviewed by Ian Irvine (Hobson) 8/29/2010
The controlling image of orange juice works well with the free verse format and modernist/existentialist thematics (reminds me of the mood opening Notes From the Underground). I like the Spleen of this piece - honest and authentic. Nice work there Dayvid!
Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader) 8/14/2010
Forget about the alignment; you seem to be putting it out like it would have come out. Although, I do prefer a black russian over many things. No, really, I drink seldom; but that is one of my favorites along with the screwdrivers. I can't seem to pick up the pen when I indulge, however. On the subject, it is nice to purposely do things differently on occasion, and sometimes let things go. I dig the loose feel of this writing, Dayvid. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald 8/11/2010
Smiles, raise your glass high!! well done

hug
Kathy
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 8/11/2010
Screwdriver is my favorite drink, just two of them and I can let the rest of the world go by>>>, you haven't lost your words!
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 8/10/2010
Hair of the dog old friend, helps to form words but it hurts to speak them out loud. Try a bacon sandwich. Ptrick
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 8/10/2010
how clever Dayvid!!
I like tequilas & orange liquors though myself
with cranberry, fresh limes & fresh oranges
oh yeah...Margaritaville!!
Reviewed by Don Juan Amante 8/10/2010
ah, screwdrivers making all seem better!
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 8/9/2010
Sounds like a fuzzy navel instead of a fuzzy head, Pastor...maybe a trip to the pulpit and a sermon on Dirty Laundry will help...look up Don Henley and Eagles on the Internet and call it Rock and Roll!

Love and Full Hasselblads,
Sage
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 8/9/2010
Dayvid, how about try OJ and Champagne. Then make a toast to a well-deserved lie in for the day and recover sans guilt, in style!
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 8/9/2010
O.J. and Vodka sound very good to me, right now.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 8/8/2010
I don't drink much but a glass of oj and a shot of vodka sounds really good right now..Vanilla vodka would make it taste like a creamsickle.. Sounds good..
Hope things get better for you.
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 8/8/2010
OJ & Vodla can help anybody develop words, just sometimes its hard to spelll them...;-)e
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 8/8/2010
Inspiration comes in odd ways and forms at times. Thanks for sharing, Dayvid. Love and peace to you,

Regis
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