by * * Starman * *
Monday, August 09, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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What is woman? Here is my vain attempt to capture lightning in a jar.
A fairy dust,
A blazing glory,
Sparks flying forth,
Mischief full of grace,
Spirit ruler of the night,
Flowering bouquets of light,
Glowing bright in cat-like eyes.
Passing breezes call out her name,
In a silent vigil nature's hushed refrains,
Moon shine glistening through the pines,
Illuminating her monuments of temporal glory,
Contrasting with antiquity of the planets and stars.
Excellent poetry poured out from Olympus to Earth.
Orange Dunes, by poet Lonnie Hicks, whose words inspired me to write this poem.
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|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Beautifulyl said Star-man! Your muse entered your soul and didn't let go, it shows! YOU are a STAR with "Woman"
Such warm loving depth! The style is different too! Love it!
Absolute delight to read and feel!
Blessings and Hugs, Soulful_SHEE
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Starman, this is an amazing poem. Not just beautiful but so intense and I love the form as well. I would like to see more poetry from you in this genre. Mystic yet so earthy. Perfection.|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|This is enchanting and stunning!
|Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks
|Starman this is great. I loved how you shaped the words as well. It captures a feeling here.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|What can I "say" but tell you that I concur, Rockie. Woman is wonderful. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by 000 000
|This is tremendously beautiful! 5 stars|