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Shadow Dreams (Japanese Sedoka)
by Lori L Moore
Friday, September 27, 2002

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Dreaming in shadows,
shapeless lovers satisfy
my unfulfilled desires...
Hungry for freedom
reality awakens...
Spirits dance within my heart.

Sedoka is a very old form. Originally, It has 6 lines, totaling in 38 syllables in the following from: 5,7,7,5,7,7. Sedoka usually has at least one poetic twist within itís structure.

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Reviewed by 10/15/2002
Really cool. I didn't know about Japanese Sedokas.
Reviewed by richard poor 10/5/2002
you always catch me with your writings.
Reviewed by Mike Ill (Reader) 9/28/2002
i'm a sucker for good short poems. fuckin great!
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 9/28/2002
You've done a beaitiful job Lori, Hmmm I might try one of these! Thanks, Dani
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 9/27/2002
Excellent DO you do it?
Reviewed by jude forese 9/27/2002
works well on the tongue...
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/27/2002
Lori thank you for sharing so many forms and the info on them , you do them all so eloquently...this one is superb!
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook 9/27/2002
You never cease to amaze me! Such eloquent words...& within *boundaries* no less! Simply amazing!
Reviewed by atomar (Reader) 9/27/2002
Pleasant tone and vivid image.
Sometimes I like minimalism...
Reviewed by Larry Skahill 9/27/2002
outstanding, but too many rules for me
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader) 9/27/2002
Another exceptional wwrite sweetie. Loved this one.
Reviewed by Tracey Hardie 9/27/2002
Excellent write...
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 9/27/2002
I enjoy playing around with the Japanese poetry and have enjoyed reading this and learning about this way of doing it.
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader) 9/27/2002
Great poem, Lori. Beautiful image of dancing spirits. Freedom is being spontaneous, not holding back.
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