by TONY MIKE NERONE
Tuesday, August 17, 2010
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Life is full of hills and quicksand. In some cases quicksand seems to fail.
Someone once said to me I was an accident
I was never to be alive on this planet
I believe that to be erroneous
Because I did father a son, and daughter
It is mental aspect of life which is my downfall
The slightest little affection someone pays me brings my stupidity to the highest echelon
I overwhelm people, particularly ladies
Even my ex-wife married to me over ten years spoke of dismay to me
I never loved you she replied to me in 1971
When I was a boy I was always serene and quiet
But the other children hated my stupidity
So now in the December of my years I still make costly mistakes
The inter-net has brought me closer to people
That becomes my time to overwhelm
I think I have done it again
I traded my heart of roses to the thorns that prick my skin
Why I live, only GOD knows
Because the thorns are becoming to hurt me badly
TONY MIKE NERONE
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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|It is so with those who "wear their heart on their sleeve," Tony. Believe me, I know. Love, peace, and encouragement,
|Reviewed by Inspire Hope
|Dear Tony I say with Paul shake it off....you are loved and appreciated. I admire your honesty in your writings too! May
the Lord strengthen and sustain you in this very difficult time,
He is a Keeper...He will keep you Tony! Sending up much prayers
for you Dear Tony! Be encouraged the Lord is on your side!!!!
|Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
|Some very interesting sights and insights. The rawness of your expressions leaves nothing to guess about, and as I read this I am forced to consider my own mortality; becaue you don't waste words, no one can truly challenge your writing, here, Tony. Of course, many of your writings have this raw, in your face, kind of approach; they give a firm look into your reality. Thanks for sharing your life experiences, Tony. Enjoy creating, always.|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|TONY...HOW CAN YOU 'OVERWHELM' ONE WITH LOVE? YOU SEEM TO BE A LOVING, CARING, GIVING INDIVIDUAL AND THIS IS NOT A BAD THING. DON'T BE SO HARD ON YOURSELF. IT IS MY EXPERIENCE THAT IN ANY GIVEN SITUATION...NO 'ONE' PERSON IS ENTIRELY WRONG, IT TAKES 'TWO' TO TANGO AND IT PROBABLY WASN'T ALL YOUR 'BUNGLING' WHY IT DIDN'T WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|I know what such cruel things said to you in childhood can do to a person. You have risen above them Tony. Depth of feeling is overwhelming to those who can't understand or share it. Maybe they are the ones who bungle things. Never let the pain of thorns prevent you from smelling the roses.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Don't be so glum chum.
Roses have thorns so that they can live in peace and allow their beauty to reign.
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Shake it off, Tony. You're among friends here and we love you.
May God bless.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Oh Tony,surely you must realize that God gifted you a place in his eden for a purpose, right? Cheer up and feel God's spirit...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
|Tony, you always write from the heart. Authenticity leaking out all over the place. Hope you can pull out of the thorns and lay for a while in the roses.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Goodness Tony, I'm sorry you're so glum right now ~
Take Care of yourself,
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Rejection is something most experience in a life time but for some it can be a mortal wound that is hard to heal and someone is always picking the scab and reminding you. Some of us never get over the feeling of being in love with love. It may be junvenile but when your looking for love it's easy to fall in the same trap over and over. Hang in there, it's never over till it's over as Yogi always said.|
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Trust is something hard to put a finger on, Tony. Good judgment vs BUNGLE will always win out if you use intuition. If it feels right, it will work out, if it doesn't feel right from the get go, it probably won't outlast you...so be careful whose garden you stop in to admire the lovely flowers because yes, sometimes we get tangled in thorns...be well, Tony.