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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
8/21/2010 |
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Long gone are Ozzie and Harriet
Took their ride on Heaven's Chariot
But left behind in sake of name
Ozzie Osbourne to play this game.
Patrick
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
8/18/2010 |
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If that is what it takes to be a star, I'm content with just being me. Powerful write.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
8/18/2010 |
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| well done |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
8/18/2010 |
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but...he is no way star material
I don't find him that bright anyway
his deception never is-
gaseous yes...bright no...
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
8/18/2010 |
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Had morphine once in the war and it served its purpose well to releave
the pain I was inflicted with. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
8/17/2010 |
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...a shooting star earthbound burning out brilliant
or earthtrapped and reaching high...whichever way, the end comes.
"When I'm high," I heard a heroin addict say one time, "it's perfect 'cause I'm wrapped from head to toe in cotton wool."
Well put, Sage.
John |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
8/17/2010 |
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I would think being free from the inner pain causing the need for morphine would transform anyone into shine and sparkle and want to continue on, interesting...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
8/17/2010 |
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| god looks after fools and drunks. fortunately, i'm both. |
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| Reviewed by Kenny Moon |
8/17/2010 |
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| Drugs are for mugs, as we know, but some see a dangerous glamour in them; only bulls in the field should snort. You capture the 'dark star' in a few succint words, sage. |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
8/17/2010 |
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Oh that word morphine. I had enough in me to kill a whale. Something taken so lightly will cause a reborn.
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY |
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| Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill |
8/17/2010 |
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Sometimes I want death to pay a visit too. But then I think about the possibility of transformation. Damn! I'm such a naive sob! Death does bring new life...the most marvelous act of nature!
Peace and shooting stars,
Dayvid |
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