|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Mentioning the end makes the reader feel the linear nature of time, while the structure of your poem also reminds us of its cyclical nature.
A landscape that has a lot to say...
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|POWERFUL INSIGHT...FOR AT THAT TIME EVEN THE 'ROCKS' WILL CRY OUT...NO HIDING PLACE!!! WELL DONE, PATRICK; PHRASES AND IMAGERY ARE WONDERFUL. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|I love desserts, they are so lucious... nevermind!
Desert living has always been tenuous. When water and food run out, people leave. Their artifacts remain, and peyote conjures up strange tongues.
|Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins
|The soul speaks quietly...|
|Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Then the world and humanity will have come full circle from beginning to end...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by The Poetess
|Love the depth in this. It reminds me of my life's journey.....only my days will never end, because those stepping stones will just become clouds. ;-)|
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|I'm glad that I was able to attend, Patrick. The burn of the Anti-Christ's demise...
|Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
|Powerful write Patrick! The imagery is resplendent with metaphor. The first and last lines are beautiful.
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Nicely conceived Patrick. Interesting you used an Anasazi cliff dwelling as an illustration.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Quite arresting photo, and compelling verse! Excellent, Patrick!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|timeless, the picture to, is like entering another world. -morgan|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Different for you, but quite excellent...e|
|Reviewed by Richard King
|Through your words, I think I hear it, "Across the ages." Very well said Patrick. Thanks, Dick|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Wow! Momentarily speechless! This is fantastic writing...clever phrasing...nicely done, my friend!
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|This is excellent Patrick!! Excellent, excellent, excellent!! Great vocab I'm sporting today.|
|Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
|Great, thoguhtful poem, Patrick. The only thing missing are the tumbling tumbleweeds. I hope your AC is still working and the cold beer and watermelon are holding out.
Your friend, Mark