|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|ravishing passion Dayvid
her heart melts...
Beware Of Love
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Detective note to file....incendiary point established, prosecution unlikely. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
|Man, you made a gorgeous jewel--youra jeweler, aren't you? This poem is so hot I had to dream of streams to cool off as I read it. Great, great sensuality from start to finish; I think I need to be near a woman who makes fires, now. Every sentence feeds into the next with perfect passionate involvement. Thanks for this exquisite writing, Dayvid.|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|People who commit arson are criminal. The poem was well crafted I just did not like the intent.
GOD BLESS YOU
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|Something happened to you in Texas. Not sure what; but something good it seems. Fantastic write.|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Chris uses muscal words but they all mean great write. Passionate and deep.|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Marked crescendo, molto accelerando, this arches back into pianissimo.
Nice work Dayvid ~
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Hot write, Dayv...e|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Metaphorically hot and captivating, Dayvid. Sad are those who have not experienced that kind of burning. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Very sensuous writing,Dayvid.|
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Quick on the scene, Dayvid! There's always the firescape ladder when in need. On his way down to put out another fire, a prescribed burn! A quick hose down shower, some Old Spice and a manicure for those artistic fingers.
Love and Arsonist Foreplay,
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|You know, sometimes one needs a good arsonist in their life...Wow, this was extremely sensually stimulating, Dayvid...Now it's time to go take a cold shower...
Much peace, love and light,