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The Arsonist
by Dayvid Graybill

Wednesday, August 25, 2010
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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The Arsonist

 

She lays there naked

Eyes closed, dreaming

Feeling his presence

She does not move

 

Intense fear or anticipation

A spark touches lightly her lips

Heat from her fingertips

Sliding slowly down.

 

Flammable liquids flow

Arms around her tight

Friction and heat rising

Suddenly flames flying high

 

Eyes wide open

Gasping for air to burn

The whole of him inside

Fueling intensely the fire

 

Hotly gushing hoses deep

Sirens and loud screams ensue

Her naked writhing body burns

Into a mound of afterglow

 

The Arsonist escapes again

Leaving the cerebral scene

His fingers drawing good-bye

Across her aching breasts

 

 

2010 © Dayvid Graybill

 

 

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Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 8/26/2010
ravishing passion Dayvid
her heart melts...

Beware Of Love
Vickie
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 8/26/2010
Hot!
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 8/26/2010
intense!
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 8/25/2010
Detective note to file....incendiary point established, prosecution unlikely. Patrick
Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader) 8/25/2010
Man, you made a gorgeous jewel--youra jeweler, aren't you? This poem is so hot I had to dream of streams to cool off as I read it. Great, great sensuality from start to finish; I think I need to be near a woman who makes fires, now. Every sentence feeds into the next with perfect passionate involvement. Thanks for this exquisite writing, Dayvid.
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 8/25/2010
People who commit arson are criminal. The poem was well crafted I just did not like the intent.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 8/25/2010
Something happened to you in Texas. Not sure what; but something good it seems. Fantastic write.
Reviewed by George Carroll 8/25/2010
Chris uses muscal words but they all mean great write. Passionate and deep.
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 8/25/2010
Marked crescendo, molto accelerando, this arches back into pianissimo.
Nice work Dayvid ~
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 8/25/2010
Hot write, Dayv...e
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 8/25/2010
Metaphorically hot and captivating, Dayvid. Sad are those who have not experienced that kind of burning. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 8/25/2010
Very sensuous writing,Dayvid.
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 8/25/2010
Quick on the scene, Dayvid! There's always the firescape ladder when in need. On his way down to put out another fire, a prescribed burn! A quick hose down shower, some Old Spice and a manicure for those artistic fingers.

Love and Arsonist Foreplay,
Sage
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 8/25/2010
You know, sometimes one needs a good arsonist in their life...Wow, this was extremely sensually stimulating, Dayvid...Now it's time to go take a cold shower...

Much peace, love and light,
Amber



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