|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Great depth to this Senryu chain, Richard. The last verse had me wondering the most. Nicely composed. Love and Hugs,
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Intriguing. Makes me want to know the rest of the story.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Oh my that ending was like a punch to the heart!|
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Ouch. Clever but ouch. My first wife served me with divorce papers at work during a staff meeting.....a very short staff meeting. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY NICE POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Clever work...and a surprise ending.|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Whats in that stogie to smoke, anything good...e|
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|My friend John just received a "Dear John" letter via voice mail (puke) last night on his phone. He played it for me. Woman said she just wanted someone to listen to her never-ending, evil clown circus rat's tail of complaints about her ex-husband of 16 years, etc. etc. John was quite bemused. I mean, voice mail for heaven's sake? Dear oh dear. Seems to be going around.|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Awwww, how sad to meet with such fate, wiping out all hope of promise, I am so very sorry....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|...ah that world of parting but not quite parting, of hoping or even thinking it's still all right and then...the papers...love, "My wisdom left me"...that I can identify with big time, Richard.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Oh yes, I can just see the smoke rising from your chimney ~
Drifting right out of your poem into my face as I read this most clever and enjoyable writing.
|Reviewed by The Poetess
|Thank you for a good laugh. Love the pic and the poem is great.|