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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
9/1/2010 |
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Great depth to this Senryu chain, Richard. The last verse had me wondering the most. Nicely composed. Love and Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
8/28/2010 |
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Intriguing. Makes me want to know the rest of the story.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
8/27/2010 |
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| Oh my that ending was like a punch to the heart! |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
8/26/2010 |
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| Ouch. Clever but ouch. My first wife served me with divorce papers at work during a staff meeting.....a very short staff meeting. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
8/26/2010 |
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| VERY NICE POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
8/25/2010 |
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| Clever work...and a surprise ending. |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
8/25/2010 |
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| Whats in that stogie to smoke, anything good...e |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
8/25/2010 |
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| My friend John just received a "Dear John" letter via voice mail (puke) last night on his phone. He played it for me. Woman said she just wanted someone to listen to her never-ending, evil clown circus rat's tail of complaints about her ex-husband of 16 years, etc. etc. John was quite bemused. I mean, voice mail for heaven's sake? Dear oh dear. Seems to be going around. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
8/25/2010 |
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Awwww, how sad to meet with such fate, wiping out all hope of promise, I am so very sorry....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
8/25/2010 |
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...ah that world of parting but not quite parting, of hoping or even thinking it's still all right and then...the papers...love, "My wisdom left me"...that I can identify with big time, Richard.
John |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
8/25/2010 |
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Oh yes, I can just see the smoke rising from your chimney ~
Drifting right out of your poem into my face as I read this most clever and enjoyable writing.
Blessings,
Christine
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| Reviewed by The Poetess |
8/25/2010 |
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| Thank you for a good laugh. Love the pic and the poem is great. |
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