|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|The older you get the less you know. Hopefully 20 years later will reveal truths. Patrick|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|"I listened to you listen to me
You love and you are Godâ€™s" two
very powerful lines.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|If we don't learn and we don't change then we must think we are already perfect and that is the true tragedy. A thought provoking pen|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Living is one giant learning process with God, very inspirationa...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|We all change as we get older, because of who we chose to be. A great write Dayvid.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|AN ODE TO WHAT ONCE...NEVER WAS. 'HONESTY' OFTEN IS NOT APPRECIATED, BUT IT CAN NEVER BE DENIED. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
|Seems like a near tragedy to read this, but it is apparent that you and your former companion have made a necessary separation; shake the dust off, and move on, it seems to say. I feel an unchangeable decision, that is painful but very needed, take place. Almost felt like crying for the sheer knowledge of loses like this. Thanks for the sincerity, Dayvid. Nice piece of realism; the parting between you as the minister, and the church.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|People grow and change and life goes on; you provide substance to reflect upon in these verses, Dayvid. Thank you. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Excellent thought provoking piece. What is in the past is past. You are a good man do not forget that.
GOD BLESS YOU
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|Brilliant piece encapsulating self reflection and examination.|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|A gem ~
This poem feels like a Dayvid essential, entirely honest and exposed, thought-provoking.
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|You provoke a lot of thought with this, Dayvid.|
|Reviewed by The Poetess
|Beautiful journey through Love.|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|i like this|