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Bar Stool Love
by Dayvid Graybill
Friday, August 27, 2010
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Bar Stool Love


Through the smoky haze his glances

Drew close as her fingers twirled black hair

Like little fiery arrows flying in the dark

He hoped she would notice he was there.



2010 © Dayvid Graybill


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Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
nice little snippit of character study
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Great poem Dayvid. This reminds me a little of a song called "Sometime Around Midnight" by Airborne Toxic Event, a local band from here in LA. You should check it out on YouTube and pay close attention to lyrics. It's the bar, ex-girlfriend with another guy, jealousy, drunken rage kind of thing. Take care:-)
Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
Go ... talk to her. I think this one is yours, really. Next one's mine ... you're always winning. Well, maybe not, but you win a lot.

Nice, low, quiet piece, Dayvid. Your sensual perspective is essential.
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
I notice in smoke free taverns
you ready to 2-step Dayvid...

No Beer Brawls Aloud
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Sweetness and great images!
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
See, there's that cocktail napkin Menno-prayer I told you about! Pass the hat! One for her, too...Dear Lord she's an angel, an exception to the phrase Why do the girls all look prettier at closing time?

Love and smoky polish sausage,
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Love the images that this conjures up, Dayvid.
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Friday night everywhere USA, 11:00pm

Been there, sometimes till 2

Reviewed by The Poetess
I like the way this flows to smoothly.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Succinct but this expresses a lot and invites the mind to imagine possibilities and consequences... ...thank you, Dayvid. Love and peace,

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
I very much enjoyed this and the brevity adds intensity...

Speaking of bars, I don't think I have ever gone to a bar but once when I was a girl, just for the food. No, I think twice. For the food. Isn't that odd?!
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Enjoyed..and hope she noticed you were there.

Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat

Love hope in four verses. Fantastic write.

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Wow Dayved this reminds me of my bar hopping days in the 80's in NYC. A well crafted piece of frustrated love.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Now that is why I support the idea of a 'smoke free' bar...but that, admittadlyy ruins any hopes of a romantic atmosphere. Nice write.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
Oh I'm sure she noticed the fire! Very explosive in few words.
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