|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|nice little snippit of character study|
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|Great poem Dayvid. This reminds me a little of a song called "Sometime Around Midnight" by Airborne Toxic Event, a local band from here in LA. You should check it out on YouTube and pay close attention to lyrics. It's the bar, ex-girlfriend with another guy, jealousy, drunken rage kind of thing. Take care:-)|
|Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
|Go ... talk to her. I think this one is yours, really. Next one's mine ... you're always winning. Well, maybe not, but you win a lot.
Nice, low, quiet piece, Dayvid. Your sensual perspective is essential.
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|I notice in smoke free taverns
you ready to 2-step Dayvid...
No Beer Brawls Aloud
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Sweetness and great images!|
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|See, there's that cocktail napkin Menno-prayer I told you about! Pass the hat! One for her, too...Dear Lord she's an angel, an exception to the phrase Why do the girls all look prettier at closing time?
Love and smoky polish sausage,
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Love the images that this conjures up, Dayvid.|
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Friday night everywhere USA, 11:00pm
Been there, sometimes till 2
|Reviewed by The Poetess
|I like the way this flows to smoothly.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Succinct but this expresses a lot and invites the mind to imagine possibilities and consequences... ...thank you, Dayvid. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|I very much enjoyed this and the brevity adds intensity...
Speaking of bars, I don't think I have ever gone to a bar but once when I was a girl, just for the food. No, I think twice. For the food. Isn't that odd?!
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
Enjoyed..and hope she noticed you were there.
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
Love hope in four verses. Fantastic write.
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Wow Dayved this reminds me of my bar hopping days in the 80's in NYC. A well crafted piece of frustrated love.
GOD BLESS YOU
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Now that is why I support the idea of a 'smoke free' bar...but that, admittadlyy ruins any hopes of a romantic atmosphere. Nice write.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Oh I'm sure she noticed the fire! Very explosive in few words.|