by Ronald W. Hull
Sunday, August 29, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Heat Goddess © 2009 Craig Wickersham
Hot, Baby, Hot
When the August sun burns hot,
my love for you comes to thought.
Free of clothes in this heat,
our dance of love is so sweet.
Our dance of love burns eternal,
our dance of love becomes inferno,
in the August heat.
And when the nighttime comes around,
the beat picks up to the sound.
The heat surrounds us like a glove,
as we dance to the beat of love.
As if in a hypnotic trance,
our senses heighten to the dance,
In the August heat.
The moon and stars dance the night,
to their rhythm we hold tight.
When the ecstasy of desire,
overcomes, we retire.
To in the morning awake,
emerge, and feel the sun bake.
In the August heat.
Copyright 2010 © Ronald W. Hull
Craig Wickersham Art
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|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Well Ron, I was so happy that August is gone, until I read this! Very intense and a pleasure to read.|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my as always a pure pleasure to read your words darlin..Hugss|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Summertime and the loving is easy! August makes loving very special Ron. Both of my children were born in May? I guess that adds some credence to my perspective on the subject. I like the way you presented this. Slowly building the emotion and then, "to in the morning awake, emerge and feel the sun bake". A passionate work finely crafted. May peace and love be always with you my friend. Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Well that's one way of getting through the heat! A pretty awesome way, I might add! Nicely done, Ronald.
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Love making when it's cold is great under the covers. Good one Ron.
Ron A. Thanks for all the jokes....in stuff
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Here in the August heat I roast
My desire for passion became toast
About the second day of the wave
Still I'm impressed
By those undressed
My energy for another day
I think I'll save.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|If its hot out your way, keep it; if it is only hot in your mind even, just keep it there for we just had a week of beautifully cool temps out this way, now we are in for more 90 degree days this week, then hopefully another cool down...I think winter is fast approaching, fortunately or unfortunately, depending on your point of view...Ed|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Hot and passionate, Ron; you remind me of why I love lying in the sun on my deck with no clothes on absorbing the energy of the sun which will soon enough be waning while welcoming winter. (How's that for a bit of alliteration? LOL! Thank you for the sunny verses. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|The heat from the sun does some wonderops things doesn't it? This whole presentation was solid. The art was great too.
GOD BLESS YOU