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| Reviewed by Connie Faust |
9/13/2010 |
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If only we had the option to say no to death. Alas, it is not in our power. Our option is to prepare.
Connie |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
9/6/2010 |
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| powerful work, Phyllis ... capturing the pulse of the soul ... love indeed transcends death ... |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
9/6/2010 |
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| Nor shall it in the greatest of schemes. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader) |
9/6/2010 |
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A blend of us,
So together—
Hither and thither,
You go—I
Sovereign -ly
Flow there … ever
Death, do, never
Curl … hands on
My angel's feathers
So loved |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
9/6/2010 |
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What does one say to such perfect verse ..to such depth..to such wisdom..what indeed...:)))
I see a woman who knows how to love..to live..to breathe..to fear..to hope..to demand of the powers that be..yes DEMAND.... for she knows she CAN!!
Kudos dear Phyllis..what a grand woman you are ( not to mention POET!
Bravo!
Blessings...
Vesna :)
PS I'm saving this piece..thank you! |
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| Reviewed by Tom Hyland |
9/5/2010 |
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PEA -
A formidable example of Defiance ...
perhaps stronger than a meek plea for help from an unknown source?
Peace - Tom.
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| Reviewed by The Poetess |
9/5/2010 |
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| And here it is again...such a heart felt poem that it helps me shed another tear for the loss of the man I held so dear. I hope you never lose yours. I hope he keeps burning your dinner and telling you how beautiful you are. . . |
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| Reviewed by Susan Smith |
9/3/2010 |
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For your burnt offerings
You pull with a frown
From that rusting microwave.
Saying, Sorry.
Grab your coat.
Be my treat!
LOL! Great image for a modern world. |
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| Reviewed by Rafika Anderson |
9/2/2010 |
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| What a touching, honest love poem. Gripping from the title through the last line. Awesome approach. Nicely done. |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
9/1/2010 |
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Thoughts creatively expressed. I've felt this way looking at my hubby. No one wants to be alone. Enjoyed this poem.
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
8/31/2010 |
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| Enjoyed very much sweet lady..Hugsss |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
8/31/2010 |
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More truth that poetry here, lovely lady, and the poetry
is powerful art. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
8/31/2010 |
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| Phyllis Jean, life this game we play. And always the player with the winning hand, death. Pursues relentlessly, patiently, victoriously. Your perspective on the game in these words shows the grit required to elude him as long as possible. May peace love and joy be with you my friend. Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
8/30/2010 |
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Classical lament.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
8/30/2010 |
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Atta girl!! Stick to your guns. Don't let em give up and don't you. Powerfully said....
Dick
PS - The book is at the printer, should be sending you your's within a couple weeks. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
8/30/2010 |
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| VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
8/29/2010 |
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Powerful, Pea; charged and powerful.
Yes!
John |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen |
8/29/2010 |
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| Love it! |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
8/29/2010 |
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| JEAN, DID YOU PAINT THE PICTURE?...IT IS ABSOLUTELY PERFECT FOR THIS WONDERFUL POEM THAT TEARS AT THE READERS HEART WITH CANDID, STRONG PHRASES OF LOVE. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
8/29/2010 |
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very lovely words from a romantic poetess!
Peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
8/29/2010 |
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This is stunning and wonderful Phyllis!
It conveys so well how the human condition is for all of us, and those we love, to be pursued so relentlessly by death.
Blessings, be well,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
8/29/2010 |
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If it were I dear Phyllis, I would pass when you do. I could not live without you. It is hard enough in this situation. At least I have your warm loving writings. You are my enchantress.
GOD BLESS YOU ALWAYS
TONY |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
8/29/2010 |
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wonderful show of emotional passion Pea
Love's Bounty Forevermore & then some
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
8/29/2010 |
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Eternity!
Sagexoxo |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/29/2010 |
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No matter what we want, Death will have its say. Powerful, powerful cry from the heart begging for just a little more time ... well done, (((Pea))). I hope this is just the Muse, but have a feeling it's not ... if you need anything, I'm here for you. :(
(((((HUGS))))) love and prayer, Karla. |
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