|Reviewed by Z McClure
|I liked the observation in your poem about September being a month of new beginnings. Usually January comes to my mind, so this is fresh!
You have a wonderful way of putting things, like "let the wind style our hair"...love that! Your picture goes perfectly with this poem.
~Z.B.McClure Merry Christ mas!
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Now if it would just cool off. . .
Just kidding. September takes you back, doesn't it? Swear
I can smell notebook paper and "two number 2 pencils." A distant bonfire tantalizes and leaves begin to crunch underfoot. New school shoes? Always feel mixed emotions. Went back to school so many times (as an adult, I mean), that not going feels like playing hooky.
Glad to be out, but not, right? Leaves are dying, and that is sad. But think of the new life they generate!
Thanks for the trip down Memory Lane. I had a blast!
ALL MONTH !!!
xOx Phyllis xOx
|Reviewed by Barbara Henry
Thanks for this wonderful poem highlighting September, that month when we all get back to the busy schedules and busy lives.
It is indeed a time for reflection as well.
The line:To open our minds,let the wind style our hair,is a real good one.
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Life begins in the spring!!
Lovely, xx Ch'erie
|Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
|Awe, so sweet and I love the picture too. Hugs, J'nia|
|Reviewed by pat medlin
|i could live in setember and october the rest of my life...methinks
thank you for these reminding words...so perfect...and especially if they get you twose to reno
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my this is so sweet enjoyed very much sweet lady...Hugss|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Oh how this sparkles and since you are a September baby then HAPPY BIRTHDAY to you too...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Optimism is good, especially if we get to go to Reno. P|
|Reviewed by Paul Drouillard
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I love this write, Eileen. I can relate to it very well. I loved school as well and ended up teaching high school for many years. I miss the "kids" (young adults really) and most of my colleagues but not the rest of it. I love this time of year as it brings back many fond memories of new school years and also heralds the beginning of my favorite season. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Richard King
|....And football season begins. Nicely said Elaine, I enjoyed it, but it really needed a mention of football season... Thanks Dick|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Nice way to start September....
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|September is awesome.....(kids in School and my b-day to). Happy Birthday.-Morgan|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Look at you, all half-pint and so cute!
lovely, breezy poetry, so delightful to read.