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| Reviewed by Daniel Keith |
9/6/2010 |
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A few short words yet so intense. May God bless you every day of your life.
Daniel |
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| Reviewed by The Poetess |
9/5/2010 |
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| A wonderful job and good deep subject matter. |
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| Reviewed by David Maclellan |
9/5/2010 |
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Very clever Annabel, and with a poignant message about the sadness of Dementia
blessings to you
David |
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| Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill |
9/4/2010 |
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A sad story captured so well in your cinquain.
Peace,
Dayvid |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
9/4/2010 |
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| You must have visited my mother this morning:-)Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
9/3/2010 |
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| Quite powerful, Annabel. |
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| Reviewed by Mark Lichterman |
9/2/2010 |
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Wow! So often the fewer words the stronger the message... Very good, my friend.
Mark |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
9/2/2010 |
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I could spend all day observing your photograph. Difficult to stand by and watch loved ones slip away into a void...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
9/2/2010 |
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Your poem captures it well!
Sleek and well said ~
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
9/2/2010 |
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I am not familiar with this style of poetry. However it had the correct syllables. And it was very good, IMHO.
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/2/2010 |
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In my humble opinion, this is a fine cinquain that expresses your chosen theme very well, Annabel. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks |
9/2/2010 |
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| I think Annabel you have captured a picture very well. Thanks for adding the last item on Dementia. It makes the piece that much more poignant. |
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| Reviewed by Rafika Anderson |
9/2/2010 |
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| Captivating use of words. But, I have to ask, is it time that is being brutal or is it disease? |
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