|Reviewed by Daniel Keith
|A few short words yet so intense. May God bless you every day of your life.
|Reviewed by The Poetess
|A wonderful job and good deep subject matter.|
|Reviewed by David Maclellan
|Very clever Annabel, and with a poignant message about the sadness of Dementia
blessings to you
|Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
|A sad story captured so well in your cinquain.
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|You must have visited my mother this morning:-)Patrick|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Quite powerful, Annabel.|
|Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
|Wow! So often the fewer words the stronger the message... Very good, my friend.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|I could spend all day observing your photograph. Difficult to stand by and watch loved ones slip away into a void...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Your poem captures it well!
Sleek and well said ~
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|I am not familiar with this style of poetry. However it had the correct syllables. And it was very good, IMHO.
GOD BLESS YOU
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|In my humble opinion, this is a fine cinquain that expresses your chosen theme very well, Annabel. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks
|I think Annabel you have captured a picture very well. Thanks for adding the last item on Dementia. It makes the piece that much more poignant.|
|Reviewed by Rafika Anderson
|Captivating use of words. But, I have to ask, is it time that is being brutal or is it disease?|