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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
9/13/2010 |
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| Andy, it works for me. There lies herein the maturity of a tenured lover and poet my friend. You have expressed the emotion perfectly and with great passion. May love and peace be with you always my friend. Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/12/2010 |
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A lovely ode to a cherished one; thank you for sharing, Andy. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
9/11/2010 |
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I tried to duck this one Andy....but Joyce is right on point. Pure and beautiful! Keep on writing!
Blessings,
Margaret |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
9/10/2010 |
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Work????? It is a perfect beauty, Andy.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
9/8/2010 |
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| It works. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
9/8/2010 |
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| Is anything more inspiring than a naked woman ? Well penned, Andy |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
9/7/2010 |
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| Terrific last stanza infused with the lush sentiment preceeding - very, very nice. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
9/7/2010 |
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| A WONDERFUL WORK...PURE AND BEAUTIFUL. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
9/7/2010 |
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| That's the difference love makes! You are a true romantic Andy and the poem is lovely. |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
9/7/2010 |
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Wow! I have to tell you how well this works! Beautifully romantic poetry, my friend!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
9/7/2010 |
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| Oh my....beautiful writng Andy..nice to read you again..take care ..Hugsssss |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
9/7/2010 |
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?Hear that?? "No question: it works" - and then some! This is such a "perfect utterance" that is seems vaguely familiar, as so it should: a classic of all time, if ever there was one. The pitch, balance and emotion are breathtaking. Not one word out of place or wasted. This is a work of crystal clarity, where heart, mind and spirit are brought into an aligned epiphanic instant. This is revelation's pure work. Hallowed words which create hallowed space around them. Complete.
I have to keep re-reading that final stanza. As you say "not sure that this works", are you aware of how naturally brilliant that unseen pause is between the second and third line? Ponder it: it is natural to you and much of your work. An innate poetical device where you link thoughts in this seamless manner without all the clutter of syntax. This is a gift and a strength - work it! :)) xx |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
9/7/2010 |
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Your Heart Speaks
The Language of
Beautiful Passion Andy!!
Through The Hidden Forrest...
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
9/7/2010 |
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| Wow - sounds like quite a woman. |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
9/6/2010 |
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| Andy, this is one of the most beautiful love poems I have ever read....it goes into my library. And no question....it works! |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
9/6/2010 |
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Yes, Andy, it works, works splendidly.
John |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
9/6/2010 |
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| Raw and Real..very beautiful Andy~ |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
9/6/2010 |
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works well, Andy ....
are you stating naked women are seasonal? ;) |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
9/6/2010 |
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You sold me with the title alone, Andy. Then I read the poem. The poem could have any title it is that good. Great writing!!
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
9/6/2010 |
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I don't think time has allowed you to miss a beat...well done!
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
9/6/2010 |
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This is one of the most beautiful love poems I have ever read. You have a bardic gift for romance. This would make any of the ladies you write about proud.
Blessings, XXX
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
9/6/2010 |
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| Hmmmmmm - interesting write, Andy. ;-) Very well done. |
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