|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|thought provoking-well done|
|Reviewed by Branch Isole
|Very telling. . . for more than a few|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I can certainly relate to the sentiments expressed within your verses, Ragno. Thank you. Welcome to AD. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
|This one reads well backwards and forwards. I like how you have expressed your indivisible desire in this writing. He must be very attractive, whom ever he is. Thanks for this one. Welcome to the Den, Ragno Donna. Excellent writing!|
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Wow love the darkness of this piece
Nice job expressing sensual thoughts
dark and captivating
Welcome to the Den family
Looking Forward to reading more of your unique writing!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|dark and alluring ...|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Welcome to the Den, Ragno.
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|Seems the turmoil is always with us. Like a sharp stick pressing us forward, sideways, backwards in directions we sometimes do and sometimes don't intend to go.|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Very nicely written. Welcome to the Authors Den.
GOD BLESS YOU
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Reading you loud and clear here, Ragno. I wonder sometimes if the intense and lingering pain is worth the pleasure we take from one another. Very well written. You have a new fan.|
|Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
|Seems to me the pain overshadows the pleasure, don't know if I understood this right though. Anyhow, intriguing and well written.|
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Oh My, this is pretty sensually dark.
Welcome to the den!
Much peace, love and light,