|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|well penned bit of your story-good for you, you rose above what you were given as a kid|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|I Don't Believe YOUR Dead Beat Daddy Beat You To Death,i.e. MY Bastard Daddy Did!
If You Have Scars In Your Mine -My Are On My Body & In My Mind!
Count Your Blessings One Poet----While You Still Can!
I Am Realist Not Idealist...
|Reviewed by Lew Duffey
|A lot of hurt showing here but then we all have some of that
Beautifully put together.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|A gem of a story/poem ~
I'm awfully sorry you went through all of that, though.
I wish you much success OPG,
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|I never forget I'm the son
of a deadbeat daddy
who never fathered steady
He left all his land to a cousin
knowing he had children that
equalled almost a dozen
He left all his kids a dollar
it made me so mad I could holler
Again I felt all screwed
but my hate will not be renewed
Had by a deadbeat dad
but I've learn to appreciate
remain happy and not be all sad
This is part of my reality line
but regardless I'm doing just fine
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
Great piece about life. You tell it so well in your very unique way. Fantastic write, dear friend.