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You Take The Gray Away
by D. L. Vegas

Thursday, September 16, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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You Take The Gray Away
      
     
 When you sing your songs
       While smiling at me
       My negativity melts away
      
     
 When your kindness evolved
       It touched me in so many ways
       A frown turned into a smile
       

           When we speak of life
       There are so many degrees 
        Yet what I see is in front of me...
        

             It  is you, trying to change my attitude
        To change my outlook on life
         Give me sound advice         
          
   
           
 You take the gray away

 edited 10/4/10                             
     
 

 

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Reviewed by Artūrs Lūsis 9/16/2010
this poem feels locked to me, though, for it keeps silent of emotions; only a description but in different shades of gray, plus black.

I mean no harm, only to express opinion; maybe some sort of push or pull in one direction or other to see how much further, employing this foundation, it is possible to build upon it, to expand.

thank you!



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