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Glad Eye Right
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Thursday, September 16, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Do the eyes lead the head, or does the head lead the eyes? |
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Glad eye right
Sad eye left
Glad I write
Both eyes might
open to verse the plight
Both eyes join as one
to face the rising sun
They will definitely blink
before the day is done
At times be right here
but want to run
However eyes have got to
follow the person
even when things worsen
Glad eye closes
to dumb stupid proposes
Sad eye sees both the
thorns and the roses
It hates to see snotty noses
Glad eye stays closed and
composes
You eyes are getting on
my nerves
I bet you both will stay open
to view a lovely womans curves
and you will make it your duty
to capture everything of beauty
The eyes know
a great show
and will not let the body go
opg
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
9/17/2010 |
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Sorry, Gem, I haven't been around lately. More's the pity.
So glad I made this one. You've opened my eyes again. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/17/2010 |
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Having had several eye surgeries and being fortunate to maintain good eyesight, I can truly relate to what you express here, OPG. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Donna Chandler |
9/17/2010 |
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They eyes know a great show. Isn't it wonderful that we can look around and see beauty!
Donna |
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| Reviewed by Lew Duffey |
9/17/2010 |
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//////Eye believe this.
Great write.
God bless,
Lew |
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