|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Eileen, as one who listened to Linda Ronstadt and Melanie Safka sing the beautiful lyrics of,"Silver Threads and Golden Needles", your poem lit my nostalgic fire. "All I want's the love you promised beneath the haloed moon, but you think that I should be happy with your money and your name, and hide myself in sorrow while you play your cheating game". Tongue in cheek or not, this is a poetic gem a will treasure affectionately my dear friend. Love and peace to you. Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Excellent as always love the photo as well sweet lady..Hugss|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Oh I love the style here........well done!!!!|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Sad thought invoked by the cold ice crystals of the haloed moon, waiting for the man of your dreams. I'm not religious, so will not say who he is].
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Awesome photo indeed, completely and totally upstaged by your tongue and cheek. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|More the fool him!!
Superb, as always Eileen, sad, but still wonderful...Like you ;)
|Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
|This is excellent. You'll have trouble topping this.
And your right, the photo is awesome. I was trying to
write about the first day of Fall and the full moon -
but scratch that! This should be in a magazine somewhere!
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|She bewitches yet the silver moon
As swatches of golden grasses swoon
For not yet lost, she sings her song
Beckoning him, although he is wrong
To abandon such a lady of the night
And the picture, now that's a sight!
Good day my witchy friend. Glad to see you are still at it. Wondered what you had been up too....just posted my Hallo' taunt to you....but thought instead of aggrivating and waiting, I would just stop by and check out how you are doing....my email still works, old gal.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|beautiful picture-sad yet lovely poem|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Wow that is a beautiful picture Eileen which is the frosting on your written words.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|:)) You have accomplished this so well, Eileen! A delightful capricious and flirtatious tongue-in-cheek with an operatic, flouncy feel... very much makes me think of the hi-speed of black-and-white old movies, the heroine bound to the tracks, type of thing! Ach, woe is me... but guess, at least, you can also say "fangs for the memories!" LOL xx|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|your nimbus is showing ;)
makes a moving poem saturated with love's light ...
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Both picture and poem are amazing. Why is love so often composed of one who gives always and one who gives occasionally? Eileen you handle the topic with humor but with a bit of a sting too. Well penned.|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Now this is why I love reading your verse Eileen, you do not fail to express, hugs|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Eileen, you may have written this tongue in cheek, but the thoughts expressed are wonderful and in such original style.|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|A photograph that captures the imagination and mixes well with your words of subtle torment...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Eileen, we both await him under that haloed moon..why do we wait? becuase we both know the same depth of love attraction that is undenibly stored deeply within our beings. I have written a full moon poem, because this full moon (Harvest) Moon is a very powerful moon. Brilliantly lit, as is your poem.
Wonderful work here, start howling, I am !
Much peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|This is awesome, Eileen, both in verse and in image. Great job; brava, dear lady!
(((HUGS))), much love, and continuing prayers~
As always, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Graphic image and verses complement one another very effectively, Eileen; and I also appreciate the theme that you share here within your poem. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Tongue in cheek or not, I love the style here, Eileeen, the sentiments and the use of language.
This is so so good.
And the picture is extraordinary.
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Beautifully done, Eileen.|
|Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
|Dear Eileen, By reading your great poem, I am not surprised as I know your art, feeling and experience. Also, the photo IS awesome and says a lot.Love Emile|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Not on me back, you just wouldn't wanna see me under this moon right nooooooooooooooooooooooooooow, a fury beast and wolf looking.
Nowt wrong with a bit of tongue in cheek. Hmmm, depends whose cheek.
Nice; kinda eerie atmosphere here, Tiggs
|Reviewed by Shay White
|I like this, thanks for sharing!|
|Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
|nicely done and yes, the picture does inspire|
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|I'm very much in awe at the construct of this poetry. Excellent.|
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Absent lover O' woo me not...ushering in the fall season under the haloed moon gets you peace of mind, Eileen...waxing Shakespearean wherefore art thou...good to see Den Mother! Be well.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Photo is terrific and a cold bed needs warming.
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|heartfelt expression in this one ET....that is a fabulous photo...you made me laugh on the last line of the last stanza|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Not much else matters if the 'dude' was not where you expected him to be...cool poem.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|A lot of inspired sentiment is abundant withing the structure of this poem, Eileen. Tongue-in-cheek notwithstanding, the secrets of wounded desire is a painful thing to see/read. Good writing.|