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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
9/26/2010 |
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| bite my neck anytime baby, they say us poets usually rat ourselves out sooner or later, I've done it quite a few times. Very interesting vampiress bio, oh myo, hey that book I will be checking out. hugs |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
9/26/2010 |
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In the power of your eloquence, Belle, you portray the
New Orleans that I know only in my imagination. What a
captivating writer you are. Write on. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Don Juan Amante |
9/26/2010 |
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| very compelling, all the best with your new book. |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
9/26/2010 |
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This sounds like my life in a nutshell. Even though death loomed in my thoughts, God had another course for me to take. I also agree with Ron that a fine writer penned these words, because these words draw the reader into an abyss of darkness and frailty, of fear and unsure steps.
These words are so haunting and so descriptive that I see myself in there crying my plight that was supposed to be my life. Even though this is set in New Orleans, this poem of darkness can be anywhere, and others like me can identify with some of these circumstances. You have penned this very well La Belle, thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie. |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
9/25/2010 |
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A bewitching tale that sucks the reader into its darker abscess.
A fine writer penned these words. Kudos and many sales.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
9/25/2010 |
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WELL, YOU'VE WET MY CURIOSITY APPETITE...AND I WANT MORE. WELL DONE LABELLE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS * FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
9/25/2010 |
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You have the skill and talent to tell a story and keep us wanting more, bravo I will check out your book too...
I agree with Ragno...some people are just not cool.
Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Ragno Donna |
9/25/2010 |
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I like your writing style Ms. La Belle, you are one smoothe lady.
I will check back and see if you have any sequals to this story.
Don't mind anyone down below some people are just not cool.
Ciao,
Ragno Donna |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
9/25/2010 |
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Oh my... and oooooooo... poor you! :(( some strange thing's bars have been rattled somewhere. Take care out there on them mean, Halloween streets, Angel....
As always, exquisite and elegant writing, Belle. My heart sinks when it gets to October cos Halloween really don't float my boat and I just find it tiresome. But your writing is always pure joy, whatever the genre, because your skill and subtle expertise transforms any subject matter into living art. I love this blend of "real-life" with what we know is going to potentially develop into the promise of the surreal and macabre but what will always also be convincing and classy. Forgive me, sickness apart, for being such a pooper. But your storytelling is always delicious and a treat for the senses. Luv'ya and thanks for healing thoughts and prayers. xx |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
9/24/2010 |
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| For Those Who Read Comments, I have no idea what that person "None of you f business" is talking about. |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
9/24/2010 |
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| Belle, you have the touch my dear friend. "my mother was a dusky quadroon in a pleasure palace in Baton Rouge". Destitution's child as it were Belle. Love that line. It draws such a artistic form on the paper with your pen. May you know the gentle warmth of love and the surround of peace this day. Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
9/24/2010 |
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| Oh dear, I must be so cheap. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
9/24/2010 |
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"...captive soon to the caramel beauty's deluge..." how good that is in a fine captivating opening volley, Belle; you're on a winner here with customary elegance and superior turn of phrase.
More!
John |
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| Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks |
9/24/2010 |
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| This had me reading on and wanting more. I like the style as well. As who doesn't like a juicy New Orleans tale? |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
9/24/2010 |
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| Belle, your poetry is like my most comfortable and therefore my most favorite pair of shoes, Once I slip them on, I just don't want to take them off. Tis so too, with your poetry, you never disappoint. Thanks Dick |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
9/24/2010 |
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You spin a darn good tale, LaBelle! Excellent; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
9/24/2010 |
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| Delightfully done, Poetess |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
9/24/2010 |
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Excellent beginning the reader will want more and will get it.
GOD BLESS YOU ALWAYS
TONY |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
9/24/2010 |
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Such perfection of eloquence and form, extravagant, silky poetry ~
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
9/24/2010 |
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| Great start! Intriguing New Orleans as its setting. Dark Vieux Carre streets to wander. Masked balls to infiltrate. Ah. Glorious indeed. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/24/2010 |
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Well definately are going to peak curiosities and imaginations with this opening...well done.
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
9/24/2010 |
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| Excellent writing, Belle. |
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