You Gave Me My Smile Back
by D. L. Vaineo
Saturday, September 25, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Letting go,
For me,
I can't
It took
Me all this
Time to find you
I did find you...
You know
What transpired
I know
I haven't
Left your soul...
Where do we go...
What is the next tier
Do you have answers
Watching and waiting
Trying to understand
I want you in my life
For the rest of my time.. .. ..
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| Reviewed by Joy Hale |
7/28/2011 |
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A hauntingly lovely poem of ones anguish when a loved one leaves your life. To wonder "if" this person will return is a gnawing hurt like none other. A beautiful look into the heart of a woman who waits and wonders. An endearing and engaging poem, D. L.
Joy L. Hale |
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| Reviewed by Shelly Long |
9/29/2010 |
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| A Smile is impossible to wear, with pain. It just does not go together, at all. I am with you, keep the smile it goes well with everything or nothing at all :) |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/26/2010 |
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Yes and to be able to smile is indeed a treasure that love can bring so easily...
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| Reviewed by Carin Spirit |
9/25/2010 |
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| D.L. ~ This brings to mind a favorite song of mine, by Rod Stewart "Your in My Heart, Your in My Soul" once there, you can't get out. Very Nice write :)))) C.S. |
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