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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
10/19/2010 |
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I agree Bill, but sometimes it is hard to project that quiet outward joy. My demons have been with me for 49 years and they are in no hurry to leave.
You have said a lot in these few words, Bill, and the message is bright and clear. But the wisdom may not be that easy to follow. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/1/2010 |
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| LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
9/29/2010 |
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| Excellent work. |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
9/28/2010 |
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Bill so glad to see that you continue to
excell with the pen...in quiet joy. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
9/28/2010 |
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Bill, may you claim your outward joy for a long long time.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
9/27/2010 |
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Bill it is so good to read you again and this is a splendid poem...
Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
9/27/2010 |
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| lovely write! |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
9/26/2010 |
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| Bill, this is beautiful work....it's always such a pleasure to read you. |
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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
9/26/2010 |
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Doug Bentley - Theank you for proofing my poem. My works take other paths at times, bu that's what I do. If it helps; I am almost blind, so errors slipp through at times. - Bill
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| Reviewed by Stanley Alston |
9/26/2010 |
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| Nice poem gathers meaning to the positive we evoke. |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
9/26/2010 |
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Bill
This poem is quiet different with the title I was expecting something peaceful but the opposite effect I got after reading.
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