|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Yes...you are now (the present) but always remember that it is your memories and lessons learned from the past and the vision and goals you have for the future that make you what you are...and that, Dawn is what can make you into more.
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|It is the relativity that we often stumble on and make such a to do over. We travel in many time plains yet struggle most with the perception of tomorrow and yesterday. For they deceive our sense of the moment with tricks and deceptive ploys. I like the way you have renewed my awareness of time differentials Dawn. Love and peace to you my friend. Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|So right. Perfect ~|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I appreciate and relate to the philosophical perspective that you have shared within your verses, Dawn. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|I really like this one, Dawn|
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|There seems to be a melancholy tone to your words. I wish that my muddled thoughts could mold themselves into poetry right now...but I fear they are like those of your first stanza right now. I hope all is well, Dawn.
May sun and warmth invade your life again. :~)
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|wow, that was a neat flow of thought, very in the present and point taken. very enjoyed -Morgan|
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|love how you pulled it together to stay present|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|The writing, as always, is deeply personal and excellent.
I agree with your last three lines. You, dear Dawn, are
definitely NOW. -gene.
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
Very thought provoking write.
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|When I applied this to myself, it makes me feel a little deflated. I do want so much more than what I am now. Great exploration in this poem, Dawn. Nice work. Hugs,
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Oh, how I relate to and am enchanted by your poetry!
The struggling along, the soulfulness. It's like medicine on this gray day.
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|nothing more, perhaps, but certainly nothing less! The sum of all our parts, rainy days and sunshine, fully meditated on and garnered to launch us into whatever lies ahead. We certainly need such days as today, Dawn - and I share your canvas exactly here in Dorset! - like the healthy act of deep breathing (!!)... Therein lies some mystical and spiritual exchange, breathing out what's gone, inhaling what's to come. Just where we are... now. Love this, bless you, xx|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|I like this Dawn, it has a sad finality about it, an acceptance perhaps of things wished for but never received...tragic.
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|I saw written once that whenever we project ourselves into the past (resentments) or into the future (fear), we are alone in the world and can only feel oneness and serenity if we remain "in the moment." So I guess the philosophy of time travel is: don't do it. Nice piece Dawn. Take care.|
|Reviewed by L Hippler
|Great poem with a strong ending. I think a lot of people can identify with this one, Dawn.|
|Reviewed by John Domino
|A great pondering poem. I like the NOW! Yes even last week cannot be changed but we can learn from our past. The key is to build a future that will be full of hope that will last. Thank you Dawn.
Love, peace and blessings NOW!
John Michael Domino
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|It downpoured a few days here last week, took my umbrella and walked in the rain, figured, if I can't fight it, might as well join it.. and it was fun :)|
|Reviewed by Michael Madden
|I can really relate to this - well put together verse.|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|I agree with George, live for today, leave yesterday behind, and look forward to enrichment tomorrow.
Much peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|yoour final stanza is so powerful-a reminder to live, truly live in each moment that is the now|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Once again, the sense of NOW is manifest in your work, Dawn, and frankly it is the only place to be.
I love where you go with this and how you say it.
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|' I am not the future... I am not even the past'-------- I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|We live for the day that creates our tomorrows and our yesterdays are in our memoirs.|