|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|This is absoluetly a brilliant writing!|
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
Once again, a great write. You are a true talent. I hope you are doing well.
|Reviewed by Russ Okamura
|You write with much passion and pain. I only wish Peace for you, My best hopes. That come one day, you will find the light that shines through your window of pain. To ease your suffering, and fill your heart with the love you truly deserve.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Chilling and so real, deeply disturbing. If we live very long Lori, we will all have been at this place, maybe more than once. It won't be this way forever if we hold on.|
|Reviewed by richard poor
|i like this....you have "bared" a pain and put it into words.i know you are jus ventin the demons within...and you did it very well.|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Well done. ~E|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|A very deep and well written poem. Excellent!|
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|ouch..this hurts...tough write well written!!!|
|Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J
|Do not knuckle under Lori. Braving it is the secret. See the number of people on your side. It should lift your heart and make you see reason. It is your feelings I am talking about. Your writting is wonderful.
May God bless you and give you the strength to face this world.
Love from India - Joel -
|Reviewed by Mehboob Panhwar
|Reviewed by Roger Ochs
|In the darkest hour of the soul is always 3 AM - F. Scott Fitzgerald|
|Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
|They say that in your darkest hours ...the truth shall be seen...and light to salvation can be found if one can open thier eyes (heart). Great write!!!|
|Reviewed by Shezray Faisal
|Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
|Great write.. penned only as one who has faced the reaper can pen. Hang in there hun. One day you will be free from these demons.|
|Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook
|I've heard it said that the cure for Depression is to read the book of Philippians for a month. The Enemy comes to kill, steal & destroy. Don't let him win. I pray the Lord restores your joy. He gives beauty for ashes, the oil of joy for mourning, the garment of praise for the spirit of heaviness. I take your words seriously, Lori. Death will cure nothing. It will lock you into your pain. Regret looks behind, Fear looks forward, Faith looks up. We love you. Don't give up. You're in my prayers. ~Connie|
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|cant get any grimmer than that Lori. This was so well done, and the feelings you've expressed were superb. I do hope this was fiction!|
|Reviewed by J. Murphy
|Such anguish portrayed in your words and I feel for you. Your poems mean a lot to so many of us on the den. J.|
|Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
I feel for the place you are in, AND I'm with Sketchman. Hang in--no need to rush it.
Find other places where Love IS where you find it, like here. Hugs, Vicky.
|Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
|I've learned to rise above the darkness, Lori. Yes, all these horrible things happen.
But there is also love and beauty. And I will always love you, Lori.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|This one gives me the goosebumps all over again.
No matter what happens, life is what we make of it. I wish the best for you.
May Lu $*_*$ / Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|The reaper will get us soon enough love.
I'm woking on your color sketch
Been terrible busy
I hope Grim holds off so you can at least
see it. (color sketch)
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A grim reaper write that you do so well, but it gives me the shivers in its intensity
... still brilliant...be well Lori
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|This is quite deep,,a true work of art,,I love the wording,,Lisa|