|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by bluecornflower orangetiger
|this is nice!|
|Reviewed by Rafika Anderson
|Awesome, Regis! I love the swift pace of the writing that matches the sentiment expressed in the text. Splendid writing and capture of the moment.
Happy new year!
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Parker
Just wondering- do you have a book with all of your poems? They are beautiful!
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|A WORK OF ROMANCE...DONE WITH THE ARTISTRY OF A POET WHO 'PAINTS' SO WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING. BLESSINGS, LOVE AND FAITH.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS.
|Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
|you are a romantic Regis. Love this work Do more!!!
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|Regis!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE This
you know I have always loved this side of you though
your romantic heart
& your passion to woman & love are so beautiful
You are the Fragrant Perfume on This Zephyrs Breeze
"Breezy" caresses our hearts
Love & Windy Days
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Another wonderful write Regis that reminds us why we love to hear your words.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|thank You Regis for this piece
it was a treat to read
Peace be with you
|Reviewed by Melissa Mendelson
|You always paint such beautiful portraits of love, Regis. Please, continue to do so. :)|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Never sussed out how women do that.
But from eons of being trained how to tame...........
|Reviewed by The Poetess
|I hope you don't melt until you are completely bleded with the drink, because this would be terrible loss. Hee! Hee! Seriously, I really like the passion in this.|
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|A smiling zephyr and swirling soul. Sounds like a great place to be lost. Patrick|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Nicely done, Regis!
Peace & Blessings,
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Regis, your zephyr left this aging gent with a smile that will last him a while. Your poem blew in gently and captured my imagination with its gentle message as "Breezy" beguiled. Love and peace to you my dear friend. Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Barbara Henry
|Excellent write Regis,replete with imagery and emotions.
|Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo
|Content-wise this is a great poem. I love the imagery and the metaphors/similes you use.
I'd be tempted to add punctuation to this poem. Also when I read the poem pausing at the end of each line it doesn't seem to flow as well for me. How did you intend this poem to be read?
I'd put the line "within yourself" as the first line of the poem. That makes the flow better and I think that draws the reading in. I'd also combine the lines "but me" & "you tease" into one line to say "you tease me". This makes the poem flow better too. Also to keep with the format of the lines "Mingle" & "With the sweet scent" I'd rearrange the four lines above it so the six lines now say:
In your drink
In your warmth
With the sweet scent
Of course these are just suggestions. As the author you do as you wish. Hope I've been helpful.
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|Cute Reg, very cute and beautiful.
May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie.
|Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
|Sounds like a very lovely lady that you admire. Love the visual in your words and also the picture! Excellent work my friend.|
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|The meteorology of love! :)
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
You were one of the first writers to find me on AD, and I've been reading your poetry ever since. Hooked, I am. I can't help but notice a common theme in many of your romantic pieces, such as this one. (As I know your poems come from the heart, unlike mine which are fiction.) The person you admire or desire in your poetry seems always to be out of reach, and you tend to see yourself as unworthy? Seems like it. Hope I do not offend. I just really enjoy reading your poetry. I'd love to see you write a poem, also from the heart, where the object of your affection is the one unworthy:) Because you are talented, and you're a great guy. You have plenty to offer. I love the visuals in this poem. Keep them coming! Love and Hugs,
|Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic
|mmmmmm..just beautiful Regis..
I truly enjoyed this piece...
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|you definately have a way with words, and smiles ;), ~Morgan|
|Reviewed by Daniel Keith
|Very nice Regis. You do have a way with words. May God bless you every day of your life.
|Reviewed by David Maclellan
|Wow! Is this someone you know...lucky man! A very teasingly descriptive account of a sensual woman. I really like this Regis.
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Breath taking sweet man love this..Hugss|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|beautiful, romantic and ful of love!|
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
|Dear Regis Quel beau tableau ensemble avec tes vers,Plein de charme et de suave. Lovely Emile|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Nicely done, Regis! Light and fun to read!
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Regis, Breezy is a metaphorical delight. Sorry I haven't
been around lately. My misfortune. -gene.
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Delightful writing, Regis...
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Great theme, words, and style, lovely as a country mile.
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Beautiful and SWEET Reg! :)
Love this painting too, so surreal like the feelings "YOU" expressed!
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|good one Regis, aj2read|
|Reviewed by Kenny Moon
|From a whisper to a scream, the voice of the beloved haunts like a unforgettable dream.|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Great piece of writing, Regis.|
|Reviewed by Susan Smith
|Great use of concrete weather words to describe feelings of the spirit.
|Reviewed by Micki Peluso
I remember and still have poems my husband used to write to me when we were young--now he writes me grocery lists LOL. Thanks for keeping romance alive!!
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Wrapped and delivered, what a gift to the one that turns you upside-down, enjoyed this Reg~|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Very clever, Reg...smooth like a whisper on the wind.
|Reviewed by Michelle Schaeffer
|The power of the magnetism of a woman!! Lost in her spell and forever falling into her her beauty*
The picture by the way was very thoughtful...It echos your words like magick!!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Well you are definitely not speaking of me, I am no good till I have me coffee in the morning anyway...oh I missed the woman part so it is not about me, now I am rejected...I'm gonna hold my breath, you'll be sorry when I'm gone...LOL, Ed|
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
Very sensual poem.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Reviewed by Ann Marquette
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Like listening to an old-time radio program with a little static, but the gist is for real and the for real is genuine. Like how you strung the words together creating a "breeze" of its own.|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Regis, this is so beautiful!|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Yes but you love all that attention don't you, Regis? I know I would, the more the better This poem was nice and breezy. Thanks for sharing.
GOD BLESS YOU
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|Poem flows coherently and wonderfully. Very nicely done.|
|Reviewed by Lew Duffey
You really shined through this one.
|Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
|The opening words, "You have the strength of a gale..." give us insight into the rest of the poem. Sensuality and strength and full of emotion. This is great poetry Regis!
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Illustrative background in a historical depiction of what comes after the picnic...Whole poem's a metaphor, Regis!
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|This is utterly gorgeous Regis ~