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Breezy
by Regis Auffray

Friday, October 01, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Painting by William-Adolphe Bouguereau (1825-1905) Flora And Zephyr (1875)




Breezy

You have the strength
Of a gale
The energy
Of a typhoon
Within yourself
But you don't need
To show off
You never do
But me
You tease
Like a breeze
You twirl my heart
Like a whirlwind
Swirl my soul
Like ice cubes
In your drink
I melt
In your warmth
Evaporate
Mingle
With the sweet scent
Of woman
Lost in you
A zephyr
With a smile                                             

 

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Reviewed by lois christensen 8/17/2014
This just flows with love. Good one,
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 5/22/2011
well said
Reviewed by bluecornflower orangetiger 2/7/2011
this is nice!
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader) 12/31/2010
Awesome, Regis! I love the swift pace of the writing that matches the sentiment expressed in the text. Splendid writing and capture of the moment.

Happy new year!

-=ra=-
Reviewed by Elizabeth Parker 11/5/2010
Hi Regis,
Just wondering- do you have a book with all of your poems? They are beautiful!
--Liz
Reviewed by JMS Bell 10/17/2010
A WORK OF ROMANCE...DONE WITH THE ARTISTRY OF A POET WHO 'PAINTS' SO WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING. BLESSINGS, LOVE AND FAITH.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS.
Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald 10/16/2010
you are a romantic Regis. Love this work Do more!!!

hug
Kathi
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 10/13/2010
Regis!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE This
you know I have always loved this side of you though
your romantic heart
& your passion to woman & love are so beautiful
You are the Fragrant Perfume on This Zephyrs Breeze
"Breezy" caresses our hearts
Love & Windy Days
Vickie
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 10/12/2010
Another wonderful write Regis that reminds us why we love to hear your words.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by William Bonilla 10/11/2010
thank You Regis for this piece
it was a treat to read
Peace be with you

William
Reviewed by Melissa Mendelson (Reader) 10/11/2010
You always paint such beautiful portraits of love, Regis. Please, continue to do so. :)
Reviewed by Andy Turner 10/10/2010
Never sussed out how women do that.
But from eons of being trained how to tame...........
Reviewed by The Poetess 10/10/2010
I hope you don't melt until you are completely bleded with the drink, because this would be terrible loss. Hee! Hee! Seriously, I really like the passion in this.
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 10/10/2010
A smiling zephyr and swirling soul. Sounds like a great place to be lost. Patrick
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 10/10/2010
Nicely done, Regis!
Peace & Blessings,
Carolyn
Reviewed by Jon Willey 10/9/2010
Regis, your zephyr left this aging gent with a smile that will last him a while. Your poem blew in gently and captured my imagination with its gentle message as "Breezy" beguiled. Love and peace to you my dear friend. Jon Michael
Reviewed by Barbara Henry 10/9/2010
Excellent write Regis,replete with imagery and emotions.

Continued success~
Barbara Henry
Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo 10/7/2010
Content-wise this is a great poem. I love the imagery and the metaphors/similes you use.

I'd be tempted to add punctuation to this poem. Also when I read the poem pausing at the end of each line it doesn't seem to flow as well for me. How did you intend this poem to be read?

I'd put the line "within yourself" as the first line of the poem. That makes the flow better and I think that draws the reading in. I'd also combine the lines "but me" & "you tease" into one line to say "you tease me". This makes the poem flow better too. Also to keep with the format of the lines "Mingle" & "With the sweet scent" I'd rearrange the four lines above it so the six lines now say:

I melt
In your drink
Evaporate
In your warmth
Mingle
With the sweet scent

Of course these are just suggestions. As the author you do as you wish. Hope I've been helpful.

Lena
Reviewed by Barbara Terry 10/7/2010
Cute Reg, very cute and beautiful.

May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie.
Reviewed by Chessly Nesci 10/7/2010
Sounds like a very lovely lady that you admire. Love the visual in your words and also the picture! Excellent work my friend.
Reviewed by Axilea MU 10/6/2010
The meteorology of love! :)

Axilea
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 10/5/2010
Regis,
You were one of the first writers to find me on AD, and I've been reading your poetry ever since. Hooked, I am. I can't help but notice a common theme in many of your romantic pieces, such as this one. (As I know your poems come from the heart, unlike mine which are fiction.) The person you admire or desire in your poetry seems always to be out of reach, and you tend to see yourself as unworthy? Seems like it. Hope I do not offend. I just really enjoy reading your poetry. I'd love to see you write a poem, also from the heart, where the object of your affection is the one unworthy:) Because you are talented, and you're a great guy. You have plenty to offer. I love the visuals in this poem. Keep them coming! Love and Hugs,
Sheila
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa 10/4/2010
mmmmmm..just beautiful Regis..
I truly enjoyed this piece...
Thankyou..

vesna :)
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather 10/4/2010
you definately have a way with words, and smiles ;), ~Morgan
Reviewed by Daniel Keith 10/4/2010
Very nice Regis. You do have a way with words. May God bless you every day of your life.

Daniel
Reviewed by David Maclellan 10/3/2010
Wow! Is this someone you know...lucky man! A very teasingly descriptive account of a sensual woman. I really like this Regis.
Best regards
David
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 10/3/2010
Breath taking sweet man love this..Hugss
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 10/3/2010
beautiful, romantic and ful of love!
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen 10/2/2010
lovely, Regis!
Reviewed by Emile Tubiana 10/2/2010
Dear Regis Quel beau tableau ensemble avec tes vers,Plein de charme et de suave. Lovely Emile
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 10/2/2010
Nicely done, Regis! Light and fun to read!

Anna
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 10/2/2010
Regis, Breezy is a metaphorical delight. Sorry I haven't
been around lately. My misfortune. -gene.
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 10/2/2010
Delightful writing, Regis...

Carole~
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 10/2/2010
Great theme, words, and style, lovely as a country mile.

Ron
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 10/2/2010
Beautiful and SWEET Reg! :)
Love this painting too, so surreal like the feelings "YOU" expressed!

Passionate_SHEEooox
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 10/2/2010
good one Regis, aj2read
Reviewed by Kenny Baez 10/2/2010
From a whisper to a scream, the voice of the beloved haunts like a unforgettable dream.
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 10/2/2010
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Paul Berube 10/2/2010
Great piece of writing, Regis.
Reviewed by Susan Smith 10/1/2010
Great use of concrete weather words to describe feelings of the spirit.
Susan
Reviewed by Micki Peluso 10/1/2010
Wonderful, Regis,

I remember and still have poems my husband used to write to me when we were young--now he writes me grocery lists LOL. Thanks for keeping romance alive!!

Micki
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 10/1/2010
Wrapped and delivered, what a gift to the one that turns you upside-down, enjoyed this Reg~
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 10/1/2010
Very clever, Reg...smooth like a whisper on the wind.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Michelle Schaeffer 10/1/2010
The power of the magnetism of a woman!! Lost in her spell and forever falling into her her beauty*
The picture by the way was very thoughtful...It echos your words like magick!!
Just Enchanting/*

Your friend,
Michelle Schaeffer
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 10/1/2010
Well you are definitely not speaking of me, I am no good till I have me coffee in the morning anyway...oh I missed the woman part so it is not about me, now I am rejected...I'm gonna hold my breath, you'll be sorry when I'm gone...LOL, Ed
Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat 10/1/2010
Reg,

Very sensual poem.

Mary
Reviewed by George Carroll 10/1/2010
Grand poetry
Reviewed by Ann Marquette 10/1/2010
Well done,
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 10/1/2010
Like listening to an old-time radio program with a little static, but the gist is for real and the for real is genuine. Like how you strung the words together creating a "breeze" of its own.
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 10/1/2010
Regis, this is so beautiful!
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 10/1/2010
Yes but you love all that attention don't you, Regis? I know I would, the more the better This poem was nice and breezy. Thanks for sharing.

GOD BLESS YOU
TONY
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 10/1/2010
Poem flows coherently and wonderfully. Very nicely done.
Reviewed by Lew Duffey 10/1/2010
A+
You really shined through this one.
Beautiful.
God bless,
Lew
Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill 10/1/2010
The opening words, "You have the strength of a gale..." give us insight into the rest of the poem. Sensuality and strength and full of emotion. This is great poetry Regis!

Peace,
Dayvid
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 10/1/2010
Illustrative background in a historical depiction of what comes after the picnic...Whole poem's a metaphor, Regis!

Love,
Sage
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 10/1/2010
This is utterly gorgeous Regis ~
Blessings,
Christine



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