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  IN The Closet
by William Bonilla
Saturday, October 02, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.

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As I am still searching for that certain POEM ALL POETS SEARCH FOR WHEN UNINSPIRED
My beautiful granddaughter was kind enough and loan me a piece she wrote 3 years ago........


 In The Closet

~~~~*~~~~

In the closet something is near
I feel a breeze coming towards me
I think it's a monster
A scary one I fear.

When I woke up
I took my inhaler
I was out of breath
From fear
As the monster
Grabbed me and sneered.

While I was sleeping
The door slammed shut
I jumped out of my bed
And screemed .....HELP!

No one woke up to help me
As I opened my closet
Nothing was there
The window was opened
The monster must have
Escaped.

By Miss Brianna Lodato
8 years old at the time
aka Miss Peabody
07/02/07



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Reviewed by D Johnson
Miss Peabody has displayed her writing skills quite well. She must get it from you.

Cheers,
Dan
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Brianna, you rock! This write brings back memories so clearly.
Well scribed. Carry on!
Welcome to Authors Den, Poetess.
Carolyn
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Brianna,
I started writing early, too. Hope you've caught the writing bug for life, because this brings some of my own memories back to mind. Keep Writing!! Great poem!

William,
Thank you for sharing this:)

Sheila
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Well done, Brianna! Keep on writing...You must be so proud of your granddaughter, William!

Anna
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Well done, Brianna!
And Thank You, William, for sharing this lovely work with us.

John
Reviewed by pat medlin
yes...a definite talent in the making...how fun to have a common thread
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Beautiful writing just like here grandpa...Hugsss to both of you
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
nice job miss brianna!
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
How delightful to read Brianna's poem you must be very proud of her, maybe she will share more of her thoughts with us...your dry spell is bond to end soon, William just keep a good thought...
peace and love, Carole~
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Brianna, you are a wonderful poet! I bet your Grandpa is proud of you. Keep on writing and please let us see more..

William you will come out of the dry spell, maybe you need a little Amber light.

Much peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by George Carroll
A poet in the making.
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
VERY-VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
What a cute write from your ganddaughter, Willaim!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Delightfully done. Congratulations to Brianna and thank you for sharing, William. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Adorable!
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by TONY NERONE
I think Brianna inherited her poetry writing ability from you, William. I think the poem was very good. You should be and are extremely proud.

GOD BLESS YOU BOTH
Tony
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