W(r)ite Beside Me
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Sunday, October 03, 2010
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Poet, i am
undone by the feel
of your pen on
my skin ----
meant for me
alone. i read
tuck them into
the chambers of
my heart. fold
them into the
my brain ----
they're safe, there.
in the loneliness
of the night,
when you're not
here, i'll pull them
out and feel like
beside me ----
(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (10/3)
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|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Karla, I can only sincerely reply, delightful my dear friend. Peace and love to you. Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|There is something about writing that's so lonely, yet not once you get going. A great write, Karla. Hugs,
|Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
|great write indeed. moving|
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|a touching poem and it is my hope that such romantic words will warm your nights always.|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Wonderful writing ...Hugsss|
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|This is a great poem!! One of your best.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|What a wonderful change of choice for you and when you change your normal patterns you sure light up the screen....well done.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|VERY interesting thoughts, Karla..e|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Wonderful comfort for the cold days ahead, Karla.|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Beautifully done, Karla.|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Karla, this is beautiful and has a sensuous feel to it.|
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|This is a beautiful pic and a beautiful image!
In Christs Love
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|Reviewed by Micki Peluso
Nice job!! I enjoyed this, especially the play on words.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Unh! Karla, that image is absolutely specTACular! I don't remember seeing that one! WOW! Fantastic; it compliments your beautiful poem perfectly! Great job; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Woah, nice flow. It must be fun having some poems about you?!