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Haunting Memory
by Vesna * Vanessa
Monday, October 04, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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In solitude and stillness



she contemplates the heavens



as thoughts of him



and all that was and had been



in ages past prickles her memory



 Senses reel



as she conveys mute



wordless missives



to  his soul



until pain and yearning



entangled  within her heart



 dissolve into the void



She   subdues rising  feelings



even though the realization that he may be only a 'dream'



still steals upon her





Time and again



in intervals of drawed breath



her thoughts race to him






alas.. gray shadows loom above her



 as the spirit  within her breast ... crushes



like a bird made of paper



then agony..



as her heart collapses




 Ancient memory


forever haunts her..



when will she release it?





Can she?













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Reviewed by Gene Williamson 11/11/2010
Lovely choice of word and space, Vesna. Dream on. -gene.
Reviewed by Don Juan Amante 11/3/2010
love is very real even in dreams, soulmates are joined forever even if not in the flesh. beautiful poem.
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 11/2/2010
Is it a memory or is it a dream? The sentiments are the same regardless of which one it is. It is what it Beautiful work.
Reviewed by Barbara Terry 10/19/2010
I guess with time this kind of hurt can heal itself. Maybe not, though. It all depends on her will to live beyond the haunting memory of someone she can never have again, if she ever did in the first place. She should just push on and push these thoughts out. With this kind of pain you can do that. There are other haunting memories and nightmares that aren't so forgiving or willing to leave. Thank you for sharing.

May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie.
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 10/14/2010
can she?...should she?
very emotionally charged &
beautifully spoken poem Vesna
the longing to feel & know

Certitudes Of Love
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 10/8/2010
A powerful and deeply reaching poem!
I do love this one, and there is so much luck involved in these matters of the heart ~
Best Wishes,
Reviewed by John Flanagan 10/7/2010
In solitude and stillness, in hope and dreaming we always look up, look to the heavens, all of us do it as if there was there something of consolation, of solution and indeed there is - the immensity and beauty beyond us, part of the dream we reach for.
You set me off here, Vesna, with your beautiful lines.
Thank You.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 10/5/2010
Without Doubt You Vesna Are Z Best Romance Writer!!

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 10/5/2010
Powerful, very moving piece! Loved it!
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 10/5/2010
As always lovely writing sweet lady...have a wonderful and safe day..Hugss
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/4/2010
Powerful and emotive expressions to which I can relate, Vesna. Sadly, when it comes to love, I have not found it to be true that "time heals all wounds." Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather 10/4/2010
very interesting spacing, very lovelorn....~Morgan
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 10/4/2010
Lovely piece of lovelorn poetry.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 10/4/2010
Cool poem, enjoyed.

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